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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

person delia_cerrano
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just reread the earlier chapters and read the last few...great stuff. Am absolutely crazy about Harry & Severus!! I would enjoy a jealous Severus but I hate Harry leaving him even for a little while. Severus is going to feel sooo rejected and then seems so little boy who doesn't know what he wants and is a child who plays atound/dates around.
person pooh
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's not quite 3AM and I'm still not ready to go to bed so another chapter! Really enjoying this...dad was a minister so I have heard lots of stories about different marriages...yours is mild! hehe
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YES! You tell her Sirius! I've been waiting for someone to write him telling her off for ages, and my dreams have come true.
Oh yes jealous Severus is always fun, hopefully he can refrain from attacking Harry with possessive kisses in dark hallways.
person tami lane
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this story. I am always excited to see new updates. Great chapter. At least Snape remembered his birthday even if it was a little early. I can see the reasoning behind Molly's anger and Sirius request. But, I still love Snarry. I can definitely see a jealous Snape in the future. Can't wait for more.
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm glad you don't want nagging, because I've discovered that I tend to bug people that don't update often enough for me, LOL. But I have just started working on a new fic, so I'm keeping busy enough for the moment, so who knows if I'll end up bugging you more than once or not?

On another note, no worries about skipping ahead, I've had to do it, too. Better that than have a bunch of filler. It's hard to write and annoying to read.

Ah, jealous Snape... I have to say, I'm looking forward to that.

Till next chapter, then!
person misssy
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this is frustrating. harry is yo-yoing with snape again. how selfish is harry that he is doing this to snape again because sirius asked him to. i hope snape does not just take harry back and that harry really has to work his ass off to win snapes heart again.
schedule April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG post more.!!!!
person starr
schedule April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved that Black told Molly off, that is not her house ...But not happy of what he said to Harry about Snape!!! who is he to say that and Harry what's up with agreeing to it !!!!!!!! Thanks for the update !
person snape_lust
schedule April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay for an update!

But there are like a million dangling threads. Such as the reason to go to the Dursley's in the first place, the Dementor attack and the status of his expulsion/trial with Ministry (has anyone even hired a solicitor?), harry's wand (where is it?), plus a bunch more (pregnancy, Ministry counseling) especially some damn explanations from Snape.

Sheesh!! I totally agree with Sirius request and am happy that Harry agreed without any arm pulling. Harry should have no loyalty to Snape at this point and the marriage was a sham to begin with. Why can't Harry date other people closer to his age and will actually be half way decent to Harry? sirius's reason's are super valid as well. Perhaps harry will realize how a person is supposed to be treated in a relationship and draw some friggin' boundaries with Snape.

I look forward to more and am totally OK with time skips to avoid a bunch of filler chapters that don't really move the story along. Great idea!

Again, you've got me totally emotionally engaged and to me, that's the mark of a good story :-)
person ChaosLady
schedule April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Short but sweet.