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for Face of Evil

by dweek

schedule August 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah missed this.

Well figured Draco had done something with the tea he gave Ginny and it looks like even Tom's inner circle are beginning to understand that if you fuck with him, he will wreck you...........or someone you care about. Looks like Draco just got a big helping of some humble pie. In the beginning of this I did not care much for Daphne or any other slytherin types for that matter do to them playing games with Ginny and Luna but now it seems there getting a good idea of the madman they through their lot in with and I am slowly starting to feel pity. It' like game of thrones meets Harry potter here with everyone plotting to there own ends lol. I enjoy that Luna knows she is being manipulated but is going along with it as to not cause her any unnecessary trouble, she is no good to anyone dead or otherwise incapacitated. Ginny needs to step her game up a bit and clue into when she is being played though. I also enjoy the dnamics of the Tom/Ginny ...."thing". She both hates and desires him while he is so un-apologeticly evil but still seems to hold her in some regard. Would be interesting if she was able to manipulate his feelings for her in some small ways to her favor and perhaps make things a bit better for the survivors of the light side.

love this story

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
person Kain
schedule July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it, looks like Daphne overplayed her hand a bit.
person Kain
schedule July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm enjoying where this is going, sucks about Hermione though. It will be interesting to see if Daphne gets in too deep and actually starts to form a real bond with Ginny. She seems more or less pragmatic than evil and is looking out for herself. This chapter was also quite hot by the way, kudos.
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm dark, but very interesting with a fresh plot. Keep at it