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for Face of Evil

by dweek

schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I thought FACE OF WAR WAS THE AFTERMATH OF FACE OF EVIL BUT IF NOT SO, IF FOR THE LOVE OF GOD LOVE AND SEE A SEQUEL TO BE DESTROYED A TOM humiliating way. Is that asking too much?
person Sincerely
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, what the heck!! I did not see that coming, not even sort of!! I love your story, please please post a sequel!
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW. Please write a sequel, I am dying to see what happens with Daphne and Draco and Harry/Voldemort and Ginny.
person B
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello again, ive really really enjoyed this fanfic - please please write a sequal i must know what happens :)
person Kain
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn your are cruel. Now you MUST write a sequel after ending things on that note. There are still so many unresolved plots and you would be evil to keep the identity of the prisoner of cell 14 a secret. Going by the ending I take it that their is still some part of Harry lingering and it is subtly influencing Tom?

please please please, write a sequel.
person Dru
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The end?!
person B
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey ther really enjoying this fic please update soon btw if u dont mind me asking how many chapters are you doing for this story and is there going to be a sequal? Thanks
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gahhh teasing us with the identity of the prisoner in cell 14, your are evil lol. If it is who I think/hope it is, then Ron either made a booboo or this is some risky Trojan horse plot. Curious about the other prisoners in the cells as well and what became of the other Muggleborn's of not just the school but the entire Wizarding world. Did they escape? were they banished? or simply imprisoned or killed?

For a while now it seems that Daphne has been going through a prolonged "Break the haughty" experience(tv tropes for more info) and now has had to deal with the big scare of giving birth to the Dark lords child. I also like the dynamic change she has gone through in regards to Ginny. in the beginning she looked down on her as the Dark Lords toy and now she is relying on her for protection and is noticeably less cocky. Blaise and Draco and still working there own schemes in Slytherin fashion but they should tread lightly because if Voldy finds out what they have been doing and what they have kept from him......whoooo boy, they would be in for some hell.

Gonna be nice to see how Ginny fares in the meetings and if she will be able to hold any sway on the new direction of the wizarding world and whether or not any resistance will form to fight the new order. Also loved seeing her insult Bellatrix and Tom defending what he considered "his"........he is still evil but I enjoyed that.

One last thing but is Tom still immortal? As I recall he has no more horcruxes and beyond being very powerful is still mortal. Unless I missed something while reading and it was already explained.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
person Allison
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I seriously do not know why this story doesnt have more reviews. I enjoy the story line immensely! The only possible advice I could give you, is that you tend to jump around from first to third person point of view, and your verbs dont always follow the same tense.

but its easily read past, despite my grammar nazi tendencies. Your storyline is well thought out, and extremely enticing. And I love that you have a group of main characters, rather than just one.

I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Please for the love of all that is good in this world, update soon.
person Kain
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It is late where I am so this review will be a small teaser for the one I will give sometime tomorrow.