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for Nothing Like The Sun

by flamingmoth

person MotekElm
schedule February 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful

person Dandelion
schedule November 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Loved it. Especially the script reading in class ;)

person karisma
schedule March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOVELOVELOVE! And then Shakespeare and Sonnet 130! Wonderful!
person MargeW76
schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great story! loved your characterization of both Hermione and Draco. Very believable way for them to get together.
person Trelweny
schedule June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME! I love how you drew out their looks and the observance of lessening animosity over weeks, even months, but in a short time as far as the length of the story itself. Very good writing there.

That last quoted piece... wow. So perfect for it's use especially being from Draco. I also like how you included Lucius and Narcissa even as mere cameos basically, for I always feel they're integral to anything Draco. It's their family's best quality -that they're so close and care so much for each other. At least in canon.

Thanks so much for writing. It was a delightful read.
person Chiquitaf16
schedule June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually comment on this site because I forgot my login and hate to leave reviews an author can't respond to. However this story was just too awesome to not comment on. Normally I find the use of poems in fanfic stories to be boring and pointless but you used them so well and used some of the most sincere and non sappy ones. Plus you kept The characters close to canon and kept the smut classy.Thank you so much for writing and sharing
schedule June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED that! Ugh so sexy! Such a good idea! I loved the poetry and it's tie into the story. Please write more of these!! I keep reading all your one shots like OMG haha:)