Reviews for Of Shield and Sheath - Harry Potter

person reggie

schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM

I really hate it when Dumbledore influences the sorting,but I love the story so far so I'm trying to not let it bother me...other than that,keep up the good work! :)

person delia cerrano

schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM

You're a very good writer! I worry over a character in a story...just want to protect and and make other people be careful of him and care for him. How silly is that for heaven's sake!

person delia cerrano

schedule June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM

So far so good. Ron is really a prat in this one!! Looks like Dumbledore is really going to outdo himself in evilness. It has to be him that wouldn't let Harry be sorted into Slytherin. I hope Draco and Harry figure out that they are being kept apart & take a "it's us against them".

person blj.14

schedule June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Not quite a T,but definitely a D. I only read the first chapter. I just can't read another downer of a story. How awful can we treat Harry this time? I just read all 32 chapters of Bound to You,and am dying for something fluffy. I want Harry to be happy,not abused and beaten down. Evil manipulative Dumbledore saddens me. I need a happy,funny fix like "Some Jokes Just Aren't Funny," or "Raspberry Jam."

person LeVeen

schedule June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Yeey new chapter each day! Wow! I really like this story and the way you write. I wonder if Harry ends up in Slytherin.

person delia cerrano

schedule June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM

That nasty Pansy! I wish Draco & Harry would be smart enough to see through Pansy's & everyones attempt to keep Harry away from Draco.

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schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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person reader

schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM

like this story repeated last chapter in previous though

person LeVeen

schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM

I really like this story. At the end of chapter 4 you posted chapter 5. And then again in chapter 5 ;)
When is the next chapter due?

person wherdatcomfrom

schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Quite enjoyable. I love the way other characters are foiling Dumbledore's plans.
Even the best laid plans can go that way, and I'm guessing that Ieson is Fawkes????
Keep going, this is intriguing.

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