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by Lomonaaeren

person The Pink Fuzzy Elephant
schedule January 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like your story quite a lot! I see what you are trying to do with Lily, either Harry doesn't listen to what she says or that is just how she sees it. I don't see Harry not giving his children top of the line brooms when there is a need and he would keep up with that.
Growing up the way I did being that ungrateful for something that costs a great deal of money like a broom does, o boy that don't. (if you will please pardon the unintentional pun please)
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I need to check up on this story more often! I was a good bit behind. And speaking of behind... seems like either Harry or Draco is about to get some. I would bet Galleons that Draco is going to be more dominant in the relationship.
person Polka dot
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Even if Harry's boss was an ass he can't go around burning bridges.
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I love the relationship between Harry and Draco that you have developed. I can't wait to read more. I can only wonder if Harry will refuse Ginny specifications on time with Lily. Does she not want to be a mother anymore? Does she not want the responsibility? She wants Lily to stay with Harry for all but two days a week. That's not really fair to Harry, and not fair to Lily, either.
person delia cerrano
schedule January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well finally...thinking about themselves for once. I think Draco has started Harry thinking about why he or others do what they do when he is with them. He does revert back to "worthless except as canon fodder/savior to the world at whatever cost to himself" though.
person SP777
schedule January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about 33...

It ALMOST sounded selfish of Draco, but I get his point. Harry takes on too much and never
asks for assistance anymore...and it's about time they took the next step in the 'relationship'.

Normally I don't do this but...what happened to Nothing like the Sun?
person sp777
schedule January 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
About #32....this was fun! I love to see Harry in action!
person Polka dot
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry should get additional hazard pay.
person delia cerrano
schedule January 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a good chapter! Love Draco being so protective of Harry...someone should be. I can see why Harry felt he had to rescue the hostages but I hope he can see Dracos' point that Harry has value also. Just because someone says Harry is the only or best one doesn't make it so. Harry deserves a life also. I was afraid that Draco would go off in a huff and decide Harry wasn't worth the fear & worry.
schedule December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Let's hope Roberts doesn't have alternative plans to wipe Harry out. Like, for instance, have Hit Wizards try to strike Harry from behind, or Roberts himself whirl around to assassinate Harry himself.