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Ch. 45

The first part of this had me lol-ing! I'm surprised Harry didn't trip over the sheets or something trying to get to Lily. I especially liked the "creative wand-waving." *chortle*

Loved Draco in this chapter. Good job!

That was a fun chapter. Especially Lily popping in on Harry & Draco while they were still in bed. And Draco's questioning her was inspired! It should create more "easyness" between Draco & her if not friendship. Lets Harry know his daughter more. When is Scorpius going to join the party so to speak?

Very emotional chapter. Ginny seems to be realizing that the marriage is over and she did a lot to kill it by herself. Being how volatile she is and self centered she may well go back to her original blow hard yelling ways. I think the kids are doing much better with calm truth being told them and a feeling of steadiness from Harry. I don't see Harry as a primary teacher or primary school owner. An investigator, Hogwarts professor or private teacher of defense sound possible. Or how about as a healer or a mind healer either private or St Mungos or Hogwarts. After everyone tinkering in his mind and all the trips to the infirmary he could really understand how children or people in general would need to be handled/helped. Harry must be tired of warfare and fighting and all the tension...mental or physical... they've caused him all these years.

wait and re wind..... did we not have that scene earlier or is it my imagination? And didnt Scorpious already try to take the debt into his hands already because Al wanted Draco away from his dad. Al and Ginny are idiots!

Ch. 42

Wow. As you said in one of your review replies, it's gotta hurt Ginny to know that she caused the end of her marriage because of a mistaken premise. When she asked Harry that last time if he'd been unfaithful, I halfway expected him to blow up at her. After all, how many times had he already denied it? But no, he kept his cool and perhaps now she believes him. Kudos to Draco for refraining to make typical Draco snarky remarks!

Well done!

42...

Well, after that, I guess it's the kids turn.

Oh boy... Ginny blowing up 'cause Draco is there? Or a mix of shit for the fan?

Ohhhh the next chapter will be exciting!! It is kind of hard on Harry because Ginny wasn't being fair in what she said or allowed the children to hear. Sounds like she didn't want to be married but she wanted Harry to continue to act like he was, Also Draco was so hurt by his ex and more tender from her and probably the war still than anyone expects. Then there's Harry's kids...kind of out of control...they attack more than talk. More like animals smelling blood. Harry and Draco need to take a trip and get a firm hold on themselves first so every one can know where they stand. Every thing else will slowly fall in or out of place from there.

Ch. 41

Arghh! What a place to leave it! *g* So it remains to be seen just what you meant by "Things blew up." Hopefully it's metaphorical and not literal; i.e., not an actual explosion. Although Ginny blowing up at Harry and/or Draco would be highly unpleasant it would still be preferable to, say, the Spiders making an appearance. Harry handled the situation with Al very well.

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

about #41...

Too bad Scorpius wasn't there to tell Al how hypocritical he was being. Want to be around
him, but not around the father.

...and is the boy being teased around Hogwarts or something to be having this type of reaction???