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person SP777
schedule April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #49..

Well, he has 2 children down...still one to go. :-) Personally, I think Harry has the right to be
rude, at least, every once in awhile, when it comes to trying to enjoy doing activities with his
son.

Say, can you up the romance a little during an interlude, when nothing life threatening is happening
to Harry? In other words, a romantic interlude with the two of them....that is if Harry can get Lilly away
from his hip at the moment. :-)
person delia cerrano
schedule April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry really seems to be getting better at knowing what he thinks & feels. Much of it thanks to Draco bringing him up short and telling him the truth and the likely results. Ron is probably going to be a handful as he's always yelled first then thought.
schedule April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
lol lovely lovely lovely confrontation... I love how Harry handled that... awesome awesome awesome :)
person SP777
schedule April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #47..

*goofy grin* Daawwww! That was sweet at the end. That was a very nice [hot] interlude
between them...now I expect Lilly to wake them up later. :-)
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the Minstery is not going to like this at all. How will they retaliate?
person Polka dot
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's not wide to burn bridges. I hope Draco has enough money to support Harry if this comes back to bite him.
person BAFan
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 46

Hmm... I don't imagine the Ministry is going to take this lying down. Harry better be ready to face the consequences.
person delia cerrano
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and enjoying. Things seem settled between James and Lily and Al seems to be willing to "think about the things"
which is good. Maybe we haven't seen the back of Ginny yet...what a witch! I'd like Harry to see put even more in her place...she's the one that wanted the divorce rather than talk & work on it not just complain. She really thought if Harry wasn't spending enough time in her bed to suit her that the only reason had to be he was having an affair? It couldn't be that they bored each other (or him anyway) or problems at work, a health problem (testostorone, depression, mid life crisis
etc.) What an ego.
person SP777
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #46..

1. LOL! Now that's a funny image, Harry suddenly cackling like a hyena, while
trying to talk to the press.

2. Uhh...he does have a plan that's going to work, right?
person SP777
schedule March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #45..

Draco L. Malfoy would make a great children's counselor...and just corrupt
children Everywhere! :-) This was a nice interlude.