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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The perfect rearranger-draco malfoy is at your service! haha This should be really interesting to see.
I enjoyed the past couple of chapters. Having james be excellent in potions is ironic, but it also seems to fit. I like the relationship that james and harry have. Harry's relationship with lily and albus are, unfortunately, not as effortless. I'm interested in seeing how malfoy will help harry with that.
I enjoyed the past couple of chapters. Having james be excellent in potions is ironic, but it also seems to fit. I like the relationship that james and harry have. Harry's relationship with lily and albus are, unfortunately, not as effortless. I'm interested in seeing how malfoy will help harry with that.
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol Draco moving in... it's funny how he is so pumped up and excited about finding the PERFECT solution for the life debt... he is giving his organizational skills and plans to brilliantly organize and fix the chaos of Harry's life. Hilarious.
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #4..
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
it's hard being the kid in a divorce, but i think it's hard trying to be the part time dad as well. mine was sad and mopy and as clueless as the way you're portraying har. like har he did try, but wasn't really around us enough to know what we wanted or needed.
at least har is keeping usefully occupied. i'll be interested to see what draco's latest idea is. i think his owl is adorable as well.
at least har is keeping usefully occupied. i'll be interested to see what draco's latest idea is. i think his owl is adorable as well.
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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lilly's a you little brat but 10 yr. old girls or 12-year-old girls tend to be I guess that's pretty spot on. Makes me feel sorry for Harry But his fault for having kids.
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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Continuing good story! I think Draco's idea for the life debt owed Harry will be something to do with his kids and the way he is semi estranged from them due to his fame.
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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is one of your best written stories. Harry's flaws, Draco's misunderstanding of how to fulfill the debt... it's all wonderful. The characterizations are unique as well. I can't wait until the next chapter.
PS Harry looks like he could use some parenting, relationship and general counseling. Poor guy.
PS Harry looks like he could use some parenting, relationship and general counseling. Poor guy.
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June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow, lily is a selfish little brat in this huh. i mean, it's understandable to a degree and how do you make a kid understand that things just don't work that way, but seriously, she needs something to make her lose the 'tude.
i look forward to seeing malfoys attempts at life debt payback. should be fun.
al seems like a sensible kid.
i look forward to seeing malfoys attempts at life debt payback. should be fun.
al seems like a sensible kid.
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #2..
Lilly is starting to get annoying like her mother...and I don't care how
UPSET she is, let me use the f*** bomb with my mother at that age, I wouldn't have been
able to sit for 2 hrs.
There is no respect there and Harry should have put his foot down on that little tantrum.
Sorry but, yes he should have.
Lilly is starting to get annoying like her mother...and I don't care how
UPSET she is, let me use the f*** bomb with my mother at that age, I wouldn't have been
able to sit for 2 hrs.
There is no respect there and Harry should have put his foot down on that little tantrum.
Sorry but, yes he should have.
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story - I am interested in the relationships between Harry and his kids. I still think Lily comes off judgemental and spoilt. I was reading what you had said about Lily not getting enough attention from Harry and most of it having to do with his own awkwardness. But given Al's and Lily's reaction, it almost sounds like Harry needs a mental break and to yell at his kids for being selfish. But then again, they are kids.