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person SP777
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

I wish I had an older Malfoy in my life. :-(
person delia cerrano
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Coming along very well...Draco & Harry beginning to know each other. Dying to know why Draco & his wife divorced. I think it might be that Draco was married for an heir and to please his Father & because he knew he was really gay. Maybe the deal was he would stay married and discreet till Scorpius went to Hogwarts.
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think learning to say no is a great start for Harry. And it can be so hard to do for someone who has been trained and conditioned to be that way. It will take conscious effort and probably be one of the hardest things if not the hardest that Draco will ask him to do.
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Learning to Say No - EXCELLENT. I love Malfoy here.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Draco is really good...I mean really good! Is he a lawyer or mental healer? If it said in the earlier story I don't remember. Can't wait till he gets hold of the kids!
person SP777
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

This looks like this will be an interesting relationship. Though how
you go about getting there will be interesting to see.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay now we're going to start getting into Harry's problems!! Draco should be really good at it. Extra cool minded, analytical, and creative He's kind of sensative about his own divorce situation though isn't he? Hmmmm. Could just be hurtful history though. It's always easier to fix someone elses problems.
person Easyreader
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love that Draco is going to basically become Harry's life coach. Maybe being "handled" will show him that being a doormat to his children is damaging them as well as him
person delia cerrano
schedule July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well I certainly didn't see that coming!!! Let the fun begin! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. I don't understand why but I really don't like Jamie having such red hair...I think it's because I never like Ginny in any of the fan fiction stories.
Especially when she has any connection to Harry.
person Timeangel93
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Harry! *snickers*

Yeah, Draco could straighten out Harry's life a bit, but as I know the two there will more than just one argument about it! *giggles*

Anyways, I hope things will get smooth for Harry again (or as smooth as it can be with being a trouble magnet :D)

You really write great stories!