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by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lils what an awful nickname, no wonder she hates him so much
person delia cerrano
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This continues to be one of your best I think. But does he still love Ginny beyond the affection of shared children? Say it isn't so!
person BAFan
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 8

Very interesting so far. I don't think I've read a fic before where Harry's relationship with his children is so troubled. Ginny, yes - that's a popular theme - but not the kids. I'm looking forward to Draco meeting Lily; will he side with her or think she's a spoiled brat? Or possibly a bit of both? Should be interesting, either way!
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry... he's probably shocked too that just that small compliment had such an impact. He has been getting all negative responses from people for far too long. Harry will probably find that he wants to follow along with more of Draco's instructions just for that positive feedback. Now about that daughter... lol can't wait to see how Draco sees that situation.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Story continues to be interesting. Waiting to read more of when Harry & Draco talk/see Lily, Al or Scorpius or Ginny.
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
good eye Malfoy :) Harry needs to have backup and not go to these investigations alone!!!
person Polka dot
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Malloy set him up so he could save his life.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. Yeah I think Draco has problems also and isn't aware of them or concerned about them.
person SP777
schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #7....

I don't know...when Harry gets started being Super Auror , I get this song
in my head, 'He-re I come to save the da--y!' :-)

Though I admit Draco is pretty smart here, you would think Harry would have caught
that first. Guess Draco had him distracted.

Anyway, that a nice little mystery you have going dealing with white powder. Where tha'
hell did you dig that one up?
person jadestonedreams
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that i am enjoying your story very much. I am glad that draco is helping harry out in this way. i know too much how people can take advantage of good people