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person SP777
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #11..

Hahahahahaaaa!! Ooooh my GAWD! This...THIS is why I'm single! I would have thrown
something at her at the 15 minute mark!

We have a saying down here, 'I can do bad on my own..' :-) Now, when Harry does start showing interest
in the same sex or should I say the same sex of a certain individual, that red haired hussy will SWEAR
she was right all along. Gah!
person delia cerrano
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Harry is finally understanding more of what's going on around him...standing up for himself...no more door mat.
Still would like to know more of Draco's part in all this? I think maybe he is into Harry more than he even realizes...or is that just what I hope?
person Polka dot
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
He should have just been honest and told her after three kids, that bod wasn't worth hitting anymore.
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this chapter! Even though Ginny listens like a box of rocks it was nice to see that harry got angry on his own behalf and actually showed it. Go Harry!
person BAFan
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10

For the first time, I have a bit of sympathy for Lily. A tiny bit, lol. At least she wasn't a complete brat in this chapter. Good for Harry that he stood his ground and didn't give in to her childish, unreasonable demand. Draco has already done Harry good. Is Harry's denial of being gay going to come back and bite him in the ass, I hope?
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked the father/daughter time. She didn't bug me quite so much this time even though she still had that 'but you weren't thinking about me at all times' attitude which is accurate for children to fall back on the viewpoint. It's how they don't really realize that their parent is a separate individual and are only seen in the role of their parent. I really liked that Harry stood up for himself again and refused to give his daughter any hope that he would try to get back together with Ginny. And I am soooo looking forward to that conversation that he is going to have with Ginny about how she mentioned to their DAUGHTER that she thought Harry might be gay. That is not something she should be saying to her daughter. Give her what for Harry!
person delia cerrano
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Reading...liking it it a lot...Lily seems spoiled and immature wanting parents to get back together for the childrens sake.
Once they grow up & leave the parents are stuck with each other or at that late date have to try to find someone to love. Harry's not gay? Maybe he just doesn't know it. He was so unusually brought up with little to no interaction between friends or certainly normal action with relatives. He seems to not understand his own feelings sometimes but goes along with what others make him think he feels...sort of...if you can see what I mean...it's late and I'm tired.
person BAFan
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9

"Ginny closed her eyes for a second and stood there. Then she opened them and said, 'I would have come after her right away if she didn
person SP777
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

I didn't think I couldn't STAND anyone as much as Ginny...until Lily was introduced.
Are wizards against butt whoopings???
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol I still don't like Lilly. She is a manipulative little brat and Harry has missed parenting 101... don't let your children give orders. They can make requests but not orders... that's a real good way to raise a kid who feels entitled to be put first.