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person delia cerrano
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is kind of not with it when it comes to what Draco is thinking or feeling or am I reading more into Draco's eyes & expressions?
schedule September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
How can things feel like they're getting straight and yet messy at the same time? Ah well, wonderful work :) Looking forward to more.
person MirzeSnape
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Keep it up, and update SOOOOOON!
person polka dot
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well quitting was extreme i think Malfoys advice has turned bad
person SP777
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #16...

'Never give up, never surrender'
person delia cerrano
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good job Harry!
person SP777
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #15..

1. LOL! I think Molly did say Harry was gay, but she said it in
such a way that he didn't catch it. :-)

2. You know, at this point of The Many Harry Potter Fanfictions of Lomonaaeren,
I really wish you WOULD do a story about Harry & Draco getting married. Kind of like
a 'Misadventures of a Potter-Malfoy Wedding' where anything that can go wrong does. :-)
As a two shot story..maybe three.
person delia cerrano
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A little progress thanks to Draco. Maybe now he will relax around him & stop being a doormat around Ginny, Ron & Lily.
person SP777
schedule September 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow..but seriously where was the pimp slap Harry was going to give him for being
so....practically right on the money AND presumptuous at the same time?
person delia cerrano
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes...things that needed to be said. Draco was pretty hard on him . Maybe some showing how Draco feels about him to show that someone can know the real Harry and still like/care for him.