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about #19

Nice chapter, I admit I'm surprised you actually included James in this one. I was
beginning to think it would just focus on Lily, with the occasional mention of Scorpius.
It was nice to see all three kids here.

The feeling that Harry got when he heard James was hurt, I almost felt, with him, his strength
& ability to take no shit, of course with Ginny there things are about to backslide I guess.

I'm guessing Draco has a another motive for taking on Scorpius' life debt?

Ch. 19

Could Ginny maybe be a little pissed off that Harry didn't let her know Jamie had been injured? I'd sure as hell be upset, in her place. When will we find out why Draco is so adamant about Scorpius not having this life-debt hanging over him? His reaction to Harry's letter should be interesting!

What is Ginny going to say now too mess things up!! I think she is vindictive. Scorpius & Albus sound so sweet...James too. I hope Draco doesn't go home but tells Harry he won't let Scorpius pay the life debt or maybe that he isn't finished "fixing" Harry (which is probably to the truth).

Well if she gets alimony she is probably worried about Harry not having a paycheck.

I wish Malfoy would stay to help Harry with Lily but I can see why Harry doesn't want him to. I wish I knew why Draco divorced his wife. Most of all I wish Harry would toughen up and make a move on Draco! Or is it soften up & realize how he feels. While I'm wishing, I wish he'd stop whining about Ginny and what they should have had or could have had...they were never right for each other. They never even really knew each other & really Harry doesn't even admit to what he is or feels. He keeps listening to what other people want him to be.

Wow, it's amazing how life works out! I've been feeling like Harry in this story, the life that just seems all wrong and the people you can't seem to please at work or at home. I was on this site to find a good story to help me relax and just randomly clicked on this master piece! I honestly could relate to the story and the issues the characters have, even the advice was an eye opener! Thank you so much for your creativity and insight on problems people can have with life. You have really made my day and given me things to think about and hopfully change in my own life!!
-Staycie

I'm sorry, but... was that it? I'm disappointed! Not because it was bad, because it really wasn't, but because it's over! I want more! o.O Please, write more! <3

about #18...

I really do hope Harry CAN help Draco in return, man acts like he has a stick
shoved up his...*ahem*...AND he seems to have this wall around him.

about #17...

1. I know who the Spiders are, they're from Mars and their Leader is a man
named Ziggy...and if that flew over your head, well...

2. Seriously, it would be SO ironic if once everything was said & done and everybody
and their momma [literally] wound up waiting with bated breathe to see if Harry winds
up hooking with Draco after speculating that *gasp*...Harry could be gay and THEY would be the ones
who accepted that fact first before Harry did, because they are just waiting to see Harry come out
of 'denial'. ;-)

...and they would feel 'justified' that they KNEW all along before Harry did! At that point, I would just
hex everybody.

Get what I mean?

I wonder if Ron thinks Harry is gay too. I am sure Ginny floated the idea by him.