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by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At last! Draco makes a move. I'm so glad that he is just at least letting possibilities with Draco flit through his brain.
person SP777
schedule November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #25...

I just feel like laughing , I can picture Harry banging his head
against the wall right about now. :-)
schedule November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry better catch Draco before he goes and kills some people! And go fuck yourself Ginny, and who cares? Love is dynamic! Clearly YOU, Ginevra Weasley, never TRUELY loved Harry...
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Malfoy's problem is that he's upset at how Harry was treated... and he probably knows that what Harry told still isn't everything.
person kit
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! big step for harry to reveal his past, not only to lily, but to malfoy as well. I wonder why malfoy stormed off? I can't wait to read about it in the next chapter! could it be that he felt guilty for how his younger self must have seemed like to a harry who had been mistreated? Afterall, wasn't draco under the notion that harry was privileged, given his reputation as the boy who lived?
I can't express how excited I am to read how this will affect their 'budding relationship'!
also, ginny needs to get over herself! haha i can sympathize with how harry's situation may look to her, but she is an adult. She needs to act more rational and not like a jealous teenager. Anyways....enough of my rant. It just goes to show how invested I am in this story.
I'm really enjoying it. thank for taking the time to write it!!

person Polka dot
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So I think Malfoys should have let Harry be alone with his daughter. Not really honoring the agreement.
person Polka dot
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I was thinking that the spiders were like the death eaters just a name for a group not real spiders.
person goldfish
schedule November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Delia Cerrano's computer died so we are reading the stories with her till it's fixed since she can't remember her password to get on by herself. I'm finding this story kind of interesting & fun and Delia whose been explaining it to me is junping up & down for the next chapter!!
person Chester
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! I hate cliffhangers!! Now I have to wait for days for an update! But wait a minute. What do you mean prison cell and sanctuary?
person SP777
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #22..

Now see..I couldn't be in the middle of a fight like that, I'd probably freak out
from the furry whatcha'ma call it coming straight at me or just start using the wand
and start blasting every damn thing in sight. :-)

...by the way, you need to start bringing in the Spiders more, I keep forgetting they're
in this story.