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holy fucking shit I cant even with this perfection I would pay for more a continuation of sorts this was awesome

Would you be willing to continue this? It was a wonderful read.
I want to see how each tries to get the upper hand. What they missed in the book.

You are brilliant. Not just in writing but in creating worlds that draw your reader in and have them feel the emotional build up. Spectacular work. I just wish you still work on the Apprentice. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing works. True Art.

Hi,
I read the story the first time in ffnet and really enjoyed it. Then I read again with adult content and loved even more. It would be fantastic if there was a second part.
Congratulations for the work.
hugs,
V.C.

I was actually goin to reread some of your stories as you have not updated Prisoner and then I saw this and thought I was dreaming! I was surprised at first as you dont have this story on fanfiction but now I understand why. It was such a thrill to read this Voldemort was as much in character as he could possible be. I really like the way youve described his current position in the World by simply telling your story without going into too much detail of what has happened in the past. I have no idea how you come up with your ideas but the background of the Empaths history was so well thought out it was unbelievable. Yet another skill which I never cease to admire. All the puzzles were so nicely together I think its needless to say we shall all forgive your long absence in your multi-chaptered stories. I loved how you portrayed Hermione as the leader of this resistance force skillfully disguised behind brothels. Very clever approach I must say. Getting information by simply giving them what they wanted. Ho Slytherin of her. I must say I could never have guessed what Voldemorts deepest desire was but I think you hit the nail right on the head by making him chase after prey providing him with a challenge he hasnt had in years. The ending was very open I must say and although I am very happy with it Id love to see more. THANK YOU for providing me with such an amazing story.

That ending! *chortles* Priceless. Oh, Voldy, it really is unlike you to overlook such an important detail. *snickers* But then again, you're so damn arrogant . . . You saw what you wanted and *cackles* didn't even look any further did you? *shakes her head* You really are like a greedy little child in a candy shop. You eat the sweets without thinking of the stomach ache to come. *snort* But at least Hermione doesn't seem too keen on doing anything drastic, she just wants you for you body.

Or wait, is that a bad thing? Did you want her to actually like/want you? Bahaha. . .

I just realized I wasn't logged in when I reviews. Alas! The woes of reviewing fanfiction at 7:20 in the morning. By the way, what is up with these captcha? So. . . hard. . . to. . . read. . .

awesome story. I would love to read more =)

Oh I'm so delighted that you updated!! I came onto aff despondently looking for something to read....probably reread as i always end up going back to your old stories. But yaaaayyyyyyyy when I found this! It was so delicious and evil an in character! Are you continuing this or is it a one-shot?
If you do continue this, I must confess I have a weakness for Tom Riddle-looking Voldmort more than Mr Snakeman. But regardless, bravo! Now i think I might go back and reread it again. :)

Oh you have a gift....I'm a very picky reader when it comes to Voldemort and Hermione...and you captured my attention from the get go........whatever you do keep going because honestly this is going to be one of those stories that can't be left unfinished .......lol....I will hound you....so keep writing and can't wait for the next chapter...man please let this be a multi multi chapter story line....*w*