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December 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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May 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! A shame it won't have anymore chapters. I truly enjoyed reading it, :)
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July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Though it's an open ending,but I am little bit confused at the end.. Tom wants to time travel ahead with Hermione or wants to leave her in the past? So many possibilities.... ;)
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! Lovely story dear! I like it when the time-travel isn't all at Hogwarts, but spread out, and I really like how Tom managed to find his way into the future ;) Hahaha, and of course he would set out to seduce Hermione in every way possible! I wonder what plans he has now for them... I mean, besides the whole "taking over the world" or whatever. Oh well, I guess we can just speculate on that now!
However, I think this story would have benefited from being longer or shorter. There was a lot of tell instead of show. The only show was Tom and Hermione's interaction, and that is all fine, but I don't know... some context stuff, like the whole Malfoy and Black-things, seemed a bit redundant. Like it was just some side-story that didn't lead to anything. The only important part was the one in the very beginning where their talk lead to Tom noticing Hermione, that was very well written. But the rest seemed a bit unnecessary. It would have fitted if this story had been longer and more complex, but since it was supposed to be shorter, I think the story would have benefited from those being edited out.
But yay! A smut finale! Miya does love her smut finale, mihihihihi. I really liked how Hermione was all trying to work and ignoring Voldemort, while he was sulking. Hahaha. Poor Voldemort, not getting enough smooches. But I don't think Hermione minded him interrupting her with some fondling and fucking ;)
Great story!!!
However, I think this story would have benefited from being longer or shorter. There was a lot of tell instead of show. The only show was Tom and Hermione's interaction, and that is all fine, but I don't know... some context stuff, like the whole Malfoy and Black-things, seemed a bit redundant. Like it was just some side-story that didn't lead to anything. The only important part was the one in the very beginning where their talk lead to Tom noticing Hermione, that was very well written. But the rest seemed a bit unnecessary. It would have fitted if this story had been longer and more complex, but since it was supposed to be shorter, I think the story would have benefited from those being edited out.
But yay! A smut finale! Miya does love her smut finale, mihihihihi. I really liked how Hermione was all trying to work and ignoring Voldemort, while he was sulking. Hahaha. Poor Voldemort, not getting enough smooches. But I don't think Hermione minded him interrupting her with some fondling and fucking ;)
Great story!!!
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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love you. You should write always. ALWAYS. I loved your story! It made me happy inside, and I love that it was from Tom's POV. Most folk do it from Hermione's but this is way more interesting. Just keep that Tomione love flowing!
Twisty.
Twisty.
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a nice story. I really love the time travel plot. It was refreshing to read it from Tom's POV for once. Of course he would eventually figure her out. haha Hermione, what did you thing?
I like the jumps forward in time you had. First Hogwart, then Tom working at borgin and burke's and then his travelling years. And still, Hermione was always there. Like a constant in his life.
I'm a bit confused though. Did he give up his villainous ways? Or is he biding his time, waiting for Hermione to disappear into thepast, so he can once again become Lord Voldemort? I can't see Tom being satsfied with 'only' being the head of the unspeakables.
Oh, and thinking about time travel also makes my head spin. Is it a loop? Or is it a new reality that Tom created by travelling into the futur? gives me a head ache, that ;)
great story. I loved it :)
I like the jumps forward in time you had. First Hogwart, then Tom working at borgin and burke's and then his travelling years. And still, Hermione was always there. Like a constant in his life.
I'm a bit confused though. Did he give up his villainous ways? Or is he biding his time, waiting for Hermione to disappear into thepast, so he can once again become Lord Voldemort? I can't see Tom being satsfied with 'only' being the head of the unspeakables.
Oh, and thinking about time travel also makes my head spin. Is it a loop? Or is it a new reality that Tom created by travelling into the futur? gives me a head ache, that ;)
great story. I loved it :)
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Shan,
I have already left you a somewhat review on the forum but I wanted to leave one on here as well. I LOVE MY STORY! It is so unique and awesome. I swear when Hermione just kept walking away from Tom, I couldn't help but laugh. It was hilarious. I also loved the part when she asked him to stop and get some milk. I was just imagining the Dark Lord doing something so domesticated and started laughing again.
I was thinking about your question at the end and was thinking about whether or not it was a loop. But then I was thinking did the whole war happen, with Voldemort and such. Since Tom sent himself into the future, so there would be no Voldemort in the past right. So Hermione wouldn't have known the name Riddle and who he was when she somehow got sent into the past. So wouldn't that future be eradicated and maybe that Hermione, I don't know maybe disappeared or something. Because he did tell her to go back, but did not actually see her do it. Also, someone with the last name of Nott as minister in the year 2000? That would be to soon after the war for a known Death Eater to be in that particular office...Soooo yeah, you have turned my brain into mush.
Anyway, I could debate and talk about this for days, but the main thing is: Thank you sooooo much for my story. I love it.
I have already left you a somewhat review on the forum but I wanted to leave one on here as well. I LOVE MY STORY! It is so unique and awesome. I swear when Hermione just kept walking away from Tom, I couldn't help but laugh. It was hilarious. I also loved the part when she asked him to stop and get some milk. I was just imagining the Dark Lord doing something so domesticated and started laughing again.
I was thinking about your question at the end and was thinking about whether or not it was a loop. But then I was thinking did the whole war happen, with Voldemort and such. Since Tom sent himself into the future, so there would be no Voldemort in the past right. So Hermione wouldn't have known the name Riddle and who he was when she somehow got sent into the past. So wouldn't that future be eradicated and maybe that Hermione, I don't know maybe disappeared or something. Because he did tell her to go back, but did not actually see her do it. Also, someone with the last name of Nott as minister in the year 2000? That would be to soon after the war for a known Death Eater to be in that particular office...Soooo yeah, you have turned my brain into mush.
Anyway, I could debate and talk about this for days, but the main thing is: Thank you sooooo much for my story. I love it.
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
No Part Two?
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Did the story jump from part 1 to part 3? I don't want to read the second chapter until I know for sure.
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what are you talking about complete there must be more to the story i mean come on really don't leave it like this