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for Ancient and Noble Houses

by Lomonaaeren

person goldfish
schedule November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
delia cerrano & I read this together since her computer broke down & is still being fixed. Wow facing your soul...we think we are good people but everyone has thoughts, vague wishs for revenge ect. I think I have too much faith to want that. Delia says she is scared of the whole thing & just wants Harry & Draco to be strong enough & pure enough to outwit the house once & for all.
person SP777
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #40..

Okay, should I be nervous about this next ordeal???

Should Draco tell Harry of those particular two approvals? Oh SURE, and
be sure to step back as Harry goes immediately into the Snoopy dance
of joy.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes, they would be excellent together! How on earth is Harry going to get through that ordeal with his "goodness" even a little in tact as horrible has the house can act? Even with Narcissa & Draco's help and that's if they can think of a way to help.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes exciting chapter! The next one should be even more so. I still don't understand Snape's attitude. Harry may look like James but his eyes and his courage was more Lily. James was more cowardly...needing his cohorts Remus & Sirius to do his mischief & meaness.
schedule October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry to stop? Okay, what is going on? I need to know. Soon.
person SP777
schedule October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #38..

1. Draco scowled. More disturbing than the thought that Snape might affect him the way Potter
could was the impulse he had to scream when Potter withdrew his attention from him..

well that's understandable, to have someone's intense attention, whether it's wanted or not, then
to see that attention focus intently on someone else or just to no longer have it, it can cause
a type of disquiet in a person. Then it makes the person wonder...if they truly wanted it.

2. Good confrontation between Harry & Severus, it's good to see the young man inside shine thru and
hold his own, without his nannies around.

3. is it about to get intense next chapter?
person SP777
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #36..

1. Draco hated how spitefully jealous that made him feel. He could have pushed the She-Weasel if she was right there.
Hahaha...oh why not? Ginny? Ginny, where are you? Draco needs to see you!

2. Well, at least they got some type of idea on how to proceed.
schedule October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Huh. Draco has a good idea, but the House is not going to like that at all. I hope it doesn't kill one, or all---minus Harry, of them.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes, lets go down & talk. Maybe something can be figured out to beat the house if they work together...all powerful, smarter than your average potter person ect.
schedule October 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The plotting, of course! Ah, so Draco saves? Harry from an undesired fate... how sweet. But now comes the 'we need to talk' talk...