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for Ancient and Noble Houses

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is smarter than the average bear to hold it together as much as he is and to try to think his way through. Draco was very clever to figure out as much he did of what could happen. He maybe...might...could have saved their lives. Wow made it through another chapter with my nerves? dreams? intact by reading the end of the chapter 1st and skimming through the rest after.
person SP777
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #46...

O_o

You know what...you have ACTUALLY gone above & beyond your imagination once again and
successfully given me the heebie-jeebies. It's about time! :-P

This latest chapter [#45 really] had me thinking is there a 'lesser' part of Hell that
shows you for what you are. I'm sure there is, I just don't want to be in it. But, it has been
something, in the past and now, that has made me wonder and this chapter kind of in an offhand way
touched on it, I'm sure without you realizing you had done so.

Anyway, wonderful chapter, can't wait to see how you conclude it.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think I will just sit back & read for the next chapter or two. Not going to try to figure out what's going on, just going with the flow.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good job of a creepy room to confront your soul in and especially the description of Harry's soul. Doesn't seem fair though. He did a lot of good and he tries so hard. Shouldn't he get credit for that and see some beauty in his soul. After all he put up with so much and while he thought some bad thoughts (everyone does) he didn't do them.
schedule November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was short though very emotional. Let's hope the House isn't trying to do exactly what Draco feared momentarily. So, now the Ordeal.
person SP777
schedule November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #44..

I remember when you first started this, you wrote that Harry's looks were changing
& they were noticeable by Draco. Have the changes stopped or are they still slowly
progressing? I thought that was an interesting start to the story you were going to
keep up.
schedule November 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loving chapter 42 I hope Draco can help :D
person SP777
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #42..

Shucks...you completely fooled me. You actually had me cringing & thinking
something sinister was going to happen in this chapter. :-(
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So Draco is going to go through the same ritual? It will be interesting to not only witness Harry's soul, but Draco's too.
person goldfish
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Delia isn't fixed yet Chking on it Monday. Delia says she doesn't know about Harry but she can't wait for the ordeal to be over. How girly of her!