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for Ancient and Noble Houses

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #6...

You know, I think I have an inkling on ONE direction you might go in this story and
all I can say is someone call Father Merrick...right...now.
person ChaosLady
schedule June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is being silly. Wonderful two chapters!
person delia cerrano
schedule June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A taller, sexier, changed Harry? Draco is very unDraco. He's changed also. War will do that I understand. Sounds like Harry will be the dominent one in this story. Hope they meet soon & Harry realizs that Draco could really use Harry as a mentor or protector or friend soon. Before Narcissa gets into those marriage contracts for Draco and I really really hope he is strong enough...self assured or smart enough not to allow that.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That is no place to end a chapter! I took it that Harry didn't write to Draco after all. So why is Draco staring at Harry?
Wondering why he abandoned the house? Please hurry...I don't do well with hanging off the cliff by my chewed up nails.
schedule June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i'm amazed it took him that long. i woulda been gone at the first showing of the shake shadow.
so what, the house basically makes the person designated heir over to suit the AIMS and ideals of the the blood line? And how does that first kill thing work? does it generate or guide in a critta to kill? if it guides them in rather than generating them that would explain the muggles in the mix though not the house elf heads.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is still one of the creepiest strangest stories I've read. And I don't read Steven King books because I thought he was too much! However here I am still reading. That's alright, Draco will be here soon and he'll fix everything.
person SP777
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #3 & 4..

Since I somehow missed a chapter...are you going to expand on why there is
a need for 'two sons and an elder daughter'?

....and how I would LOVE to introduce Harry to the book called 'The Amityville Horror'
that would certainly keep him up at night. :-)
person BAFan
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4

And the creepiness just keeps growing. Brrr!
person ChaosLady
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This keeps getting wierder and weirder. But please don't stop!
person delia cerrano
schedule June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Creepy spooky...Harry needs to find some back up. And I hope it will be someone that can tell him how to do an exorcism!!
Can't wait for him to go back to Hogwarts where I hope Draco will give him something to think about...get him back to normality. Did Sirius see all this stuff? He's a Black. Maybe the house is why Belatrix was nuts and Sirius was always kind of off the track...over pranking, over emotional ect.