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for Ancient and Noble Houses

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You've got me...I don't know how you are going to get Harry away from the "house effect". Your stories always surprise me in a good way
of course.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A hair cut from Draco that was allowed by Harry? Hm. This is going to be very interesting. Very interesting indeed. I must wait to see why Draco ran... hopefully, not for long!
person blj.14
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch.1-10:So far it's like seeing an oncoming plane crash,you don't want to watch but you can't look away. What happened with Kreacher's injuries was rather sickening. I'm not liking this new Harry very much. How much darker and disturbing will it get? Will Harry ultimately save himself? What would happen if he just physically destroyed the house?
person delia cerrano
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Next chapters are even darker? Can't handle that sorry. I will check in each time and maybe read the last paagraph first or authors note or something before I full out read it. That way I can kind of keep up with story but not get all emotional. When it gets "happier" I'll start in again reading every word. I really want to know how pairing goes & how Harry gets out from under the house so to speak...and that poor elf!!!! I couldn't believe Harry could do that. He's lucky Draco even speaks to him! As a Black family member maybe he doesn't have a choice.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At least Harry is asking for help. Interesting update.
person SP777
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

1. You know, I'm glad I read the reviews for this before I reviewed. If the kiddies
are tripping about THIS story, god help them ...how would they react to something like
'Forgive Our Trespass...' OR the constant angst/rape stories that were constantly..and I
do mean CONSTANTLY being written in the earlier years, with a few odds & ends sprinkled
here and there when this section was still sort of new.

They really would of had their minds blown, especially with egotistical authors who realized they
got more reviews with angst than just actually stretching their minds & writing fiction that stretched
the imagination [..and a few authors were still in high school].

That's where you come in.

I can honestly say you are one of the rare authors who..not only completes their damn stories no matter how
long it is...actually tries to do something different for the masses. This story is no exception.

Personally, I'm glad you actually started writing this, because of the fact, it puts you on edge and makes you
want to peek thru your fingers and wonder 'God Lord, what's going to happen now???' The responses prove that, you
got something good going here & no matter what folks say they will read...and if they DON'T like it, well hell you
have 6 other damn stories here.

Sooo, with that said, you're doing a damn good job with a story that is high on the suspense, the drama, it puts you on
edge and it honestly makes you think about 'what will happen next', instead of being just a story to read to pass the time.
If you only did stories like that, you might as well quit.

..and I hope you aren't getting tissue by the time you're thru reading this. :-)

Now that I've wrote all that...let me review.

2. ...and there isn't much for me to say here. :-D Heh!
But for what it's worth, I hope Kreacher can heal himself, he might be a wee bit strange, but his recent
screen time has made him more...intriguing and I'm curious to see where you take his character.
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is going to be desperate not to turn into a Black... especially after he just enjoyed Kreacher punishing himself. Malfoy has to be the one to help because I don't think Harry will be able to even bring himself to tell Hermione about the thoughts and actions he's been having. She would be too appalled.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's about time Harry came to his senses. Excellent update!
person SP777
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #9..

O__O