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Alright, this is the 13th fic I will have read by you- Today alone. I haven't started reading this one yet, but I just HAD to say something to you. I -=love=- your work. I absolutely -=love=- it. Your writing is amazing, the flow is beautiful. The strength and consistency of the character personalities are flawless in their presentations. They don't waiver back and forth whimsically like some other authors have done, tampering with the reasonable personalities of them to make them weak willed and broken and sad. Yours burn, are alive. You may not have written these characters from the base up, but you -=own=- their writings in your stories. I vastly appreciate your writing in ways I can't even begin to explain. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us, and I am an official, heart open hardcore fan! BUT GOOD LORD. In Marathon and The Wages of Going On, The buildups are killing me. I love the way you honestly write the smut scenes and how they MEAN something to the story!! I can't wait to read everything else you've written!! Please add me to some e-mail update list thing :D! For EVERYTHING!

Hey I just read chapter 52 a fantastic story ;D Thank you for taking the time to write.
Is their going to be a sequel?

So what's going to happen to the House now? Kreecher?

Oh that was a good one with a good ending. Ok, ready for your next one!

about the end..

Wow...that's it???? Damn that felt kinda fast! You need a epilogue.
I would liked to have read how they handled Kreacher, but, I'm sure you feel you've done enough.

Good story tho'...lots of intense scenes & emotions. Completely unique in this fandom.

So... Harry, putting Draco's life before yours makes Draco aroused. Remember that. Keep it close, and when he's not in the mood just bring that lil' tid-bit of information and he'll wanna fuck real quick.
And... what a cliffhanger! Not so much nail-biting as much as me being a bit too impatient.

Glad they got out of that horrible room. I've always disliked Kreacher intensely but what is Harry going to do about him & about the hoouse? Will he really just let the house just sit there? Too bad we couldn't follow Harry & Draco...just to help make sure Harry got there safely of course...ha ha ha

about#48...

Personally, I think the Ordeal Room was meant for you to face your fears and try to
overcome it..or be driven mad by what you feared the most.

If it's Houses in plural, so what is Malfoy Manor doing when its heir is being threaten by Black House?

great story, but for like half of it I couldn't help but wonder: why doesn't Harry just find the Potter house and cancel the Black. Potter is a house of light right? Just a bit of fridge logic. But seriously, this fic is sweet, and I like how you don't excuse Draco's past actions.