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for DNA Mishap

by blade-of-the-shadows

person Ana
schedule July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kind of think you meant conception not consummation. The consummation of Mr. Potter sounds as if he's masturbating.
person LeVeen
schedule July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much! How many chapters do you think it will be? And how often do you update?
person pooh
schedule July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
forgot to check out when you wrote this chapter...good chapter...looking forward to the next chapter!
person HEARTSTAR
schedule July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
yes sev and draco to tne rescue lol tisk tisk harry lolmore when you can please ty.
person Genuka
schedule July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. can't wait for an update.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great going! Everything is happening quickly as far as Harry & Severus are concerned. They really haven't talked. I get the feeling that Harry doesn't understand or know what his feelings really are toward Sev. After all he's always had to learn as he goes all his life...no one ever really taught him or talked to him about magic or especially his magic much less Veela. He must have very physical feelings for Severus without any context for them.
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh i cant wait for the next chapter
person mihoshi05
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am totally in love with your story. I love the brotherly relationship that has already began between Draco and Harry. Poor Harry must have gotten the surprise of his life.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Boy Draco realllly cares about his brother! Tattoo? A big lily? Sitting on Sev's lap, kissing then running off? Harry needs to get a grip! Why is he going to see Lucius?
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. Thanks for the wonderful update. You sure know how to leave us hanging though, huh? lol!

Loving this all. Please update soon.