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Wait... WHAT?! In answer to a complete massacre and the emergence of a new evil, the "brilliant" minds of that group came up with passing the marriage law?! And, what is wrong with Kingsley? Is it Kingsley? (Your mind, btw is brilliant, as those spells and the execution were awesome!) I know Hermione has to be okay, or the story would end, but I am sorry she got so hurt. I can only hope she remembers him calling her by her name, so she understands that he knew it was her. And, I also have my fingers crossed that they actually talk for the first time in forever and for a change. I admit to having a bit of fear about where this marriage law is going to take them, but I also trust your plan for your story and look forward to more as fast as you can get it to us. Best of luck in your studies! Thanks again, HG4eva

Right when I read the title of the chapter, I was on edge as to when the violence would occur. I love the way you led up to it with the creepy crows and funny tasting drinks in the last chapter. I never expected it to happen when it did (such an inopportune moment!!- right when draco was gonna tell hermione that he knew it was her!! no!!) I'm glad they were in the balcony when draco disapparated ....wouldn't want them to end up like everyone else. speaking of which!....I hope blaise is okay and I'm curious about the other characters that were at the masquerade, ginny, ron.

All this drama, i love it! I need to know what is wrong with the minister. it cant be him right? that sentence of bringing them to justice sounded very much like what the masked man was saying. another spell that they have modified perhaps? Its amusing to see that right after there is a blood bath...the ministry passes a marriage law, really?
Harry had every right to be upset!!....but he should also be suspicious... How will this affect harry/luna and draco/hermione? Based on the story summary, every eligible pureblood must marry a halfblood or muggle. so they should be alright...right? since harry is halfblood/luna is a pureblood and draco is a pureblood/hermione is a muggle.
Anyways....as you can probably tell...I am really excited for the next chapter! Thanks for taking the time to write this awesome story!!

I kinda stopped reading this story at the last chapter. I've been skimming it, mostly to see what happens with Luna and Harry but you've lost me with Draco and Hermione...it's beyond irritating. The whole Mia thing shows Hermione's immaturity. How did she expect Draco to behave? And Draco seems like someone who wouldn't really put up with these kinds of games. When did Hermione become such a silly person? You should include out of character warning on this fic for the later chapters. Also if he loves her so much why would he suddenly take her virginity at a party? Ultimately it's your story and your muse, but I think it lost a lot of momentum.

This chapter was amazing! I totally did not see this coming. You did an amazing job of describing what happened after the explosion and the tension in the whole scene was great. I loved how Draco spoke to Hermione and how his first priority was to protect and save her and then to get back to the ball. Did him insisting that he had to go back even though he had a concussion have anything to do with his bond with Harry? Anyway... it was totally awesome. I loved how Harry handled himself and how Draco helped to change the situation when he attacked the main guy. Hopefully Hermione will stop hiding her feelings after this too.

Ohhhhh myyyyy!!! This is the first story I have honestly gotten into and I was checking the site at least once an hour for the last 3 days for the new chapter. Please ace your class and write write write! Absolutely love the story! This chapter was wow! Such a heated exchange between 'Mia' and Draco and the heartfelt worry when Draco rushed her to the hospital. Awe I can't wait for the next chapter!! Thank you Eris!!!!!

Er, wow. Just wow. That's about all I have to say and I think it sums it up perfectly lol

Hermione never stops amazing me with how undoubtably stupid she is. Honestly, how did she want this night to go? Draco goes home with Mia and proves that he is still a man whore, Draco rejects Hermione and proves that he is loyal but then she doesn't get any dick, OR he sees through it all and she gets dick. Draco isn't too bright when the blood flow leaves his brain, cut him some slack Hermione.
Ugh this whole chapter is just so eerie!! The crows, dark wings bring dark words! The building and all it's history. THE DAMN RIDDLE!! Which by the way is making me feel like a bloody idiot! Can't figure the blasted thing out and I just know MorningSnow is sitting there on her throne laughing at me! And that cliffie! Omg and that kitchen scene!! Oh my glob and that dare!
Cliffie! I laid here yelling at my phone over that mess! You have now been called a special assortment of names, live with it! That kitchen scene?!? Sploosh. Love Draco just taking it. Getting his bump and grind on, making Hermione dizzy as shit, letting her know he wants to put the P in the V! Can't wait for that! Oh and that lumping dare! Kinda hope he loses so he has to kiss Harry! Like, a big ass "I wanna make gay babies with you" kiss! Ugh, why does that do it for me?
Can't wait for the next chapter, you're driving me crazy. So glad you enjoyed that last post. It just made me thirsty. I will remember my promised dance of Luna and Harry, and the gift story of Draco/Hermione/Harry (that is exactly how I want that sandwich to go). You're awesome and you know it. Keep on keeping on.

This chapter was absolutely amazing..couldn't control my giggles and and my grins whilst reading it.
The eeriness is also making me really curious.the crows n the funny tasting drink..
Wonder what you have planned for the later chapters.

I can't express how much I love this story! It is honestly one of the highlights of my week when I see you update! Please keep going as I can't stand waiting for your chapters. Thank you so much for giving us a piece of this magic.

Hey! I am enjoying "Daylight," too! :-) Now, your update. I can honestly say I said "crap" out loud when I realized it was over. I loved the long update and thank you for every word, so don't think I'm complaining, because I am not. But, now I have to wait for dddaaaaaayyyyyyyysssssss for more. I'm already dying! That was one of the best setups I've read...ever! Their kitchen encounter was HOTT! I enjoyed every moment of their flirting and found it very interesting that neither thought they'd gone too far or too fast. I wonder how far she would have gone if Harry hadn't come home just then. Methinks she would have been a virgin no more. Then her setup and plan... Her plan was so perfect, she out-planned herself. lol She was only missing the one fact that she doesn't understand or believe; that Draco can be and is now a one-woman man. I am so proud of him right now! Him turning her down flat and then getting so ticked with Harry might as well have been a proposal of marriage. lol Now, Hermione just has to wrap her large brain around the fact that he didn't want "her," because he only wants her. ha ha ha LOVED IT!! Harry's little moment of torment was almost funny, as he tried to explain without explaining. And, though I love Ron in canon, I have to say in this story I laughed when she turned him down and for Harry. I hope he gets to find out that it was Hermione, too! That way he can't claim he was pining for her all this time. I do wonder where Ginny is and kept expecting to see her there somewhere. I didn't miss the strange taste to Draco's drink, nor the ominousness of the crows. I only hope Draco and Hermione get to be honest with each other before all hell breaks loose. Now, I will try to concentrate on the rest of my week as I wait for your next update. It will be difficult, just so you know! :-) Thanks! HG4eva