rate_review Reviews

There are elements of this story that are fabulous: time magic, a new group of dissidents, Luna & Harry. However the unresolved sexual and romantic tension between Draco & Hermione has gone on wayyyyy too long. Let's move along already.

FINALLY!!!
<3 <3 <3

Oh. My. God. Eris, this was such a great flippin chapter. Seriously. I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat through the whole thing. And then you drop this amazingly hidden little gem of Draco curing cancer and saving Hermione's mother. Holy shit. I loved it. Thank you!

Okay, so I was watching season 4 of torchwood and there was this part where capitain jack tells this guy that he is in charge and he just pushes him down to his knees by the shoulders and head and makes him get to work. For some reason I could only think of Draco. Not only this Draco but the Draco from "daylight" by MorningSnow. Ugh, can't wait for their wedding. It's gonna be a crazy honeymoon.
For a moment there I was like homg, random breast cancer. But then Draco went and healed her mom and I'm just like, whelp...that sealed the deal. Honestly, your Ronald and Ginny are just the worst people. A part of me kinda wants them to come around soon. But they probably won't and that's okay.
Daaaaw, Luna Potter. So cute. She makes him so happy. If only it wasn't for Loony, we could get that Harry/Draco/Hermione party started. But I love her so much, she makes everything so bright and good.
Hermione + Draco = bed by j. Holiday. Yes. Oh man.

I love this story so much, it's nearly 2 in the morning and I've just finished chapter 22 reading under the covers so the light doesn't wake my partner. Dedication or what! I can't wait to see how you handle the next bit, I'll bet my left sock the newer stronger Hermione doesn't just roll over and agree. Thank you for sharing such a great story with us. You've got the characters down pat now, you make 'em dance!

Yay!!!! You're back! Congratulations on finishing school!

Imagine this... you have a house full of people... you are happy to have them over... then one of your favorite stories updates... what do you do?

Answer: you take your phone and sit in the bathroom to read it! lol

I couldn't review, but I got to read it. :-) I love that Draco and Harry's bond has them sharing personality traits. That's fantastic! Giving Harry the cajones to get Luna to marry him so soon after dating was great! But, I am sorry it gave Draco all those worries and insecurities. Thank goodness Harry forced their talk on him. I actually sighed very loudly at all the missed opportunities between Hermione and Draco. I mean, even they knew what was happening and couldn't get past it. That night in her room, I could happily have killed Ron and smacked her around for her reaction. I still don't get the Ministry and its decisions...idiots!! And, finally, ummmm I don't know how to react to that proposal and have a bad feeling she won't either, after their past few days and his actions and words that morning. Add to it the fact that I can see her brain going to Harry and Luna's love and happiness and I see disaster. Poor kids... will they ever get it right? Finally, who are these evil people and what the heck is next?

I AM SO GLAD YOU'RE BACK!!!! Thank you, HG4eva

I seriously hope that Hermione makes Draco squirm in the next chapter, but then I hope that she says yes right away also. I'm also in love with this story, it's so freaking amazing and very unique. I look forward to seeing that you've posted. I even check on random days hoping that you've posted a new chapter lol can't wait for the next chapter =)

Oh man!!! What a way to give your readers (and Hermione!) apoplexy!
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Eris!!! You're killing me with the cliff hangers!!
I loved the vivid detail of Draco sitting in constant wait for Hermione to wake up. Very endearing and it's making me fall in love with Draco even more! That prat Ron is getting on my nerves, however. He really does treat Hermione like she is a doormat!
Putting the Valiant into the mix was a great idea. I think that it gives all the characters a new reason to keep on fighting with all their might. (For their lives, their loves, their well-being)

I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter :)

(Congrats on the 94!)

SQUEEEEEE!!!!
So I'm laying here reading the last part and I'm like "now kiss!!!" At Harry and Draco and their little conversation. I love their relationship, no bullshit! Just a deep respect for one another and an envision of each other's personality traits.
Mmmm, you treated me twice today didn't you mama! First I get my gift of Luna/Harry action and in the shower no less! She is so damn sexy, just stripping and walking off humming. Got the weirdest lady boner over that. Homg and Harry can barely control himself when she is concerned. Love him losing it. And the love behind it is so passionate! He loves so hard cause love is precious to him. Something that he grew up without and now he cherishes it so dearly and loves so hard when given the chance. Surely he has enough love to invite Hermione and Draco into his relationship. I can dream can't I!! Lol
"Marry me." Oh man! Oh geez! Oh glob!! In my head I see Hermione doing the single ladies dance all over the sitting room after Draco popped the question. He's about to put a ring on it! For the love of glob Hermione! Don't granger this up!
Okay, honestly, those terrorist pureblood haters are so in on this marriage law thing. I feel it in my jimmies!
Fuck off Ronald! Gawd! I can't even handle him right now. Like, not even once.
Love this story, love you. Can't wait for more.