rate_review Reviews

This is a fabulous story with so much going for it: Time theory, bashable Weasleys, and a smouldering romance between my favorite characters. I am looking forward to more.

Whoo hoo a brilliant malfoy with sex appeal will spook have hermiones attention

Darn my phones auto correct is annoying.I meant he would soooo have her attention. His focus on her was sexy as all get out too.

huh... does that mean with Hermione staying overnight that Draco might catch her unawares and act... um... inappropriately because he thinks it's one of those muggle women? Well... I can hope :)

This is a fun story so far and I love the setup! I look forward to him getting home and Hermione being there. I also wonder how such a smart person can be so stupid. Sigh... Just like real life. lol Thank you! HG4eva

not bad but the weasleys live at the burrow and i don't think that even if they got the money for a new place that they would move from their beloved home at the burrow

yeah!!! Good for you Hermione... I hope you royally dumped Ron and it's allllll over the papers. Next Harry totally needs to dump Ginny. How superficial she is. I really liked how Draco reacted to Hermione before he realized who she was. You have done an awesome job of establishing the friendships between Harry and Draco and Harry and Hermione... which I really really like. You aren't rushing this story and it is well developed. Looking forward to reading more :)

A couple words you use are ones I tend to gloss over because quite frankly they make me cringe because they are so from a guys more basic POV but those were actually from Draco's POV so they went right along with him lol.

Anyway, you write really well so I'm happy to welcome you to AFF and hope you write lots more!