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June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I realized I wanted to review here because when others look at your story, I don't want them to think it's no good because you have so few reviews. :-) So, thank you!! I love that she was so obvious, and I think Draco will have to play with her a little soon. I mean, how else will he know if she's really interested. Plus, she DOES want to see his rooms... *insert smirk here*. Thank you, hon! HG4eva
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Have you ever consider posting this elsewhere, say Hawthorn&Vine or Granger Enchanted? I like AFF since this place is really for Mature content so there's guarantee that everything will stay intact and stories here are generally very good, but it's pretty hard to navigate around this site. I mean, there's no subscribe/follow/favorite button to alert me if you update.
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That part where Harry was wondering what ifs was so sweet.
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, that with all the ways Ron and Ginny and perhaps others of the Weasleys have changed with their fame and new money and new mansion that Arthur seems to have retained his role of loving, supportive father-figure to both his blood and honorary family. His little speech to Hermione had me sniffling right along with her in happiness.
I've grown to really be uncomfortable with Ron/Hermione pairings in general but you've made Ron even worse for her than normal. Not good, not bad, just commenting. It does however make it easier for accepting a break between them. Still I hope he gets out of the course he's set himself for Someone. I don't dislike Ron in principle... I just think he's not right for Hermione; that her being with him is "settling" and while she may be content (with a nice Ron) in the end it would be like putting her light under a bushel.
So Zabini sees further into Draco's "feelings" as they are than the male in question. Not really surprising. I just hope Draco doesn't do anything to hurt Hermione. Does Draco even know she's a virgin? Certainly Blaise doesn't, or he wouldn't have made that comment about Ron not giving her what she needs. I'd hope you Blaise, who seems relatively nice at least even if a playboy, wouldn't be pushing Draco to have a one-off with a virgin simply to get her out of his system. That would be beyond cruel.
Thanks for writing.
I've grown to really be uncomfortable with Ron/Hermione pairings in general but you've made Ron even worse for her than normal. Not good, not bad, just commenting. It does however make it easier for accepting a break between them. Still I hope he gets out of the course he's set himself for Someone. I don't dislike Ron in principle... I just think he's not right for Hermione; that her being with him is "settling" and while she may be content (with a nice Ron) in the end it would be like putting her light under a bushel.
So Zabini sees further into Draco's "feelings" as they are than the male in question. Not really surprising. I just hope Draco doesn't do anything to hurt Hermione. Does Draco even know she's a virgin? Certainly Blaise doesn't, or he wouldn't have made that comment about Ron not giving her what she needs. I'd hope you Blaise, who seems relatively nice at least even if a playboy, wouldn't be pushing Draco to have a one-off with a virgin simply to get her out of his system. That would be beyond cruel.
Thanks for writing.
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can't wait to read more, SOON!
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well darn... I was hoping Hermione would catch Ron out to lunch with another woman or something. Loved the scene with Hermione walking in at breakfast :)
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please have her get away from Ron as soon as possible. I don't know what JKR was thinking when she paired Hermione with him. Not a good match.I can' even bear to read it in Fanfic. So, onward with some passion between Draco and Hermione.
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I will check the forums later, but my account isn't complete out there yet, so I am reviewing here. :-) Thank you!! That was one of the most unique premises I've seen in a long while! I also love that you have her completely not trusting him, no matter what, but still intrigued by him. And, him wanting her, unequivocally, is great!! I think I am going to love your Blaise. I already love your Harry, Draco and Hermione. Thank you and please update again soon! HG4eva
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I adore an intelligent Draco. This time-knowledge... wow. Just wow.
So the home has accepted Hermione already? Interesting...
Well at least Draco has admitted to himself he wants Hermione. I'm curious to see how it goes from here. It's not like Hermione's just going to let him "have" her like he's used to having girls. Not when she's waited so long. At least she'd better not. I'd be highly disappointed in her. Even if it IS Draco and he's totally dreamy with that added intelligence booster.
Thanks for writing.
So the home has accepted Hermione already? Interesting...
Well at least Draco has admitted to himself he wants Hermione. I'm curious to see how it goes from here. It's not like Hermione's just going to let him "have" her like he's used to having girls. Not when she's waited so long. At least she'd better not. I'd be highly disappointed in her. Even if it IS Draco and he's totally dreamy with that added intelligence booster.
Thanks for writing.
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this and can't wait for more. Also a nice setup for a Draco/hermione/Harry threesome if you could go there. I really like the dynamics you have between the characters.