rate_review Reviews

What? That's not cool! Come on, we want more! But enough of that. You have a great way of writing. It's almost like I can feel you emotions in the words you've written. It's very good. It's like you pull me in. You trap me in the words and I think of nothing else until the chapter is through. Kudos! For you're first fic you have a natural talent and a way with words. :)

I'm very much enjoying the story and will continue to do so as long as you keep posting!

Regarding pacing--Regardless of what others think, THIS IS YOUR STORY. The pace is set perfectly for the way the story in your head is playing out.

From an author's perspective, we write a story as the characters in our heads dictate and try to do them justice in the process. Despite the fact that the characters belong to JK Rowling, in this scenario, in this story, the characters belong to you and interact through you.

For those who complain about the pacing being too slow, or the interactions too repetitive, I say, "To each their own. If lemon after lemon is what holds their interest, they might want to stick with stories that cater specifically to that and forego stories in which plot and the build up of sexual tension between the characters happens at a slower pace.

I don't judge-- I read. ALOT...as in 150 pages or more per night after a full day at work.

And, as I stated previously, I am enjoying your story and your take on the characters...if I have any complaint it's that I want MORE of your story and as soon as possible. (Well, maybe that's not exactly a complaint, but you get my drift :-)

Keep up the good work!

-S

i think we can all agree that harry should be with luna

Ah!!! I was tricked. This was an excellent chapter update! It definitely left me gaping in shock, confusion, and disbelief. I NEED to read what happens next! The anticipation is going to kill me, i know it.
I want to say thanks to your sister for convincing you to update on wed. May she have a great birthday.
Well, until next chapter!

That ending was just mean ... I want more :P

I like the story and the powerful time magic concepts. However, I think it's way past the time for both Hermione and Harry to drop their respective Weasley paramours.

Thanks for the update complete with sexy Draco action.

Happy birthday to your sister and thank you to you! :-) I made my sister read mine online, too. lol This chapter was so utterly delicious, until (I assume) he used his time turning abilities and rewound things, darnit! :-) Man, I want a kiss like that before I die! Brava, my dear! HG4eva

oh wow... what was that!??! it was very very hot... I liked Draco's reactions to Hermione and that Hermione was able to think at all... but him just now walking in... what did he do?!!?

I am very much enjoying reading this story. You have created some interesting and unique ideas such as the time spell. I am thoroughly sick of Ron and Ginny, and I hope they get the boot