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Howdy! While I love canon-Harry and Ginny, and most fan fic versions, too, your Ginny needs to be bitch-slapped, so I am more than okay with him finding happiness and sanity with Luna. :-) Thank you for what was a very busy (in a good way) chapter! Let's see, from the beginning...

- I am glad it was Ginny because she needs to go even more than Ron does. He's stubborn, silly, and too big-headed, but he's not a manipulative beyotch. I am glad Harry couldn't get Luna off his mind and ended the night on a high. :-)

- Hermione realizing she was comparing Draco to Ron, and that Ron was losing, was very well done. ;-)

- Draco and Hermione having a nice night together and then that cute little moment was very sweet. I was almost as bummed as he was angry when Ron showed up the next morning. But, I liked that it made Draco want to be a better person for her. awww

- Harry figuring Draco out was cute, but I am glad he kept it too himself. And, EEK! to the bond they made with one another. Stupid boys! lol

- I, once again, LOVE your Blaise. Him teasing Hermione and ticking off Draco was artistic in its beauty. lol

- Hermione coming to finally understand that she was A LOT attracted to Draco was written perfectly for the character you've created. She was methodical, logical, and then emotional. Perfect! Now, to see what she dos with it... lol

- Ginny's manipulations... ARGH!!!!!!!!! But, all three of their reactions were just as expected. Though I did giggle to myself when Hermione didn't pick up on Draco's instant protection of her. Snort! Slowest "smartest" witch ever! lol

- The end was just right!

- the spoiler - Loved it. So, can we have 14 now? *insert puppy dog eyes here* ha ha ha

Thank you!! HG4eva, but not in your story! ;-)

ohhhhh!!!!! a weasley is going to mess up the evening... and you left us there!!! I want them to mess up their own relationship as well. I think Harry and Luna are so cute together and you really did a great job of showing his attraction to her. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I absolutely loved that chapter! Their truce was funny, as she didn't know half the conversation she was having, and he couldn't seem to stop himself from riling her. His new determination was adorable and I laughed out loud at his blatant belief that he was going to get her in the end with little problem. I think it will not be as easy as he thinks. lol But honestly, that chapter was for me 99% about Harry's future happiness with Luna. His complete captivation was palpable! I wish Luna had seemed more interested, though I guess even if she was, she wouldn't show it, as everyone knows he's a taken wizard. Her compliment was perfect though! And, I don't know which red head I want to see less right now. Ron showing up would make things happen faster with Draco and Hermione, as he would most assuredly blow up and she would have to react and see more of his bad side. But, Ginny showing up would hopefully be the end of her and Harry, as she would flip her lid and tick him off enough to simply break it off, especially after the article she had written. I don't think she even has a clue how upset he would be about her trying to hurt Hermione, his sister, and more of her craziness could just push Harry over the edge. Each situation would be great, so I look forward to seeing who it is and where you go with it. :-) Thank you, hon! This is really a good fun story! HG4eva

What, what?! Lol. I absolutely love how you can capture the chemistry between two people and put it into words. I know I say it every time I read one of your chapters but I think I'll continue to say it. :) Now to wonder is it Ginny or Ron... Also I have a question, I Draco really engaged to Astoria and there is just some understanding between the two where he is a rampant playboy? Or is the betrothal something Astoria has made up in her mind? I would appreciate you clearing the air.

And I just wanted to add, Praise you! Praise you! Finally a writer of a WIP that keeps up on her updates. :) A WIP is a dangerous thing to fall in love with because most of the time the writer just stops when it starts to get good. :( I am guilty of being such a writer and have vowed since to not post a fic until it is fully written. So thank you, thank you for not stopping and keeping up with these speedy updates!

I compliment you on separating your paragraphs but if I'm not mistaken a new paragraph is also suppose to start when someone starts speaking. I will double check the handbook.

However you write just keep doing it! I love it! :)

Victoria

OH myyyyy!! Which red-head?!?! Ginny? Ron?
Argh! Cliffhangers!! I love them. I hate them. I hate that I love them.
Aw, Hermione's preconceptions just got blown out of the water! Malfoy? Being nice? Using that cunning for nice things? What a nice change of pace. Usually people make Malfoy out to be such a sneaky little git, even when trying to bed Hermione. It's nice to see him using his natural talents for good.
And Harry going for Luna? I love that pairing as a backdrop. Luna is such a (insert appropriate adjective here, if there is one, I don't know it) character. But Ginny is such a little 'fame hound' in this story. It seems like its a running theme with the Weasley's that I don't think I ever noticed until now. Huh.... Weird.
Anyway: Good Chapter! I enjoyed it! Keep it up!
...........Is it Wednesday yet?

please say that was ginny and shes now out of the picture because shes a bitch in this and harry and luna would make super cute babies

oooo, nice cliffie! looking forward to more :)

I am absolutely enthralled, thank you so much for you portrayals. You've captured everyone as how I imagined they might be. You are a wonderful writer and I can't wait for the next installment :)

Yes, I enjoyed Draco's realizations and new determination, and yes, I love your Blaise, and yes, I still feel a badly for poor Ron's stupidity and imminent pain. But, I have to tell you that that was one of the most plausible, best written, and most touching explanations of Harry post-war that I've ever read. I felt his pain and anger in every word and could "see" the scene so clearly. I wanted to hug him. lol I am glad Hermione got her answers, but I am happier that she understands her best friend a bit more and that he felt he could let go and tell her everything. I seriously hope you update again REALLY soon!! Thank you, HG4eva

It seems like a good story, but the paragraphs are too busy. If you started a new paragraph every time a new person speaks, it would flow so much better and be easier to read. I cannot read it this way, my ADD distracts me from one huge paragraph to the next. May I suggest, perhaps, finding a beta? I'm sure you'd get lots more traffic and lovely reviews.

-Jess