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okay for serious, I have been checking back for an update every hour for the past two days. I must have more!! The torture...it is acute. Please post again soon, I miss Draco and Harry already.

cant wait for more.. i so hope that harry ends up with luna, but please dont put ginny with blaise i truly cannot stand that coupling

This review has been a little put off but I'm finally getting around to it. I don't remember which chapter it wa in and should probably do my duty as a reviewer so, hold on, ... Okay, now I'm back it's the beginning of Chapter 12 'The Truce' and Draco is remenicing on his realization of his interest in Hermione. You said, 'It had been humiliating to watch the Italian grin every time he was made to repeat it; but Draco had said it out loud and he had meant it. I like Granger. '

I pictured this slightly different, insteaded of grinning I feel like every time Blaise made Draco say it he would have burst out laughing. It wouldn't have been malicious just slightly funny for Blaise to hear that his best friend likes Granger! Whichever way it is written the jist was gotten and it was hilarious in my head.

Also I think I've stated this before in a review although I can't remember and am too lazy to go look through all the reviews to check but you should really consider posting on Hawthorn and Vine. I think you gain quite the following and possibly awarded (I would nominate you at least :) It's a strictly Dramione site (dramione.org) in case you didn't know)) and I feel that is where your fic belongs. I appreciate all the time and effort you put into writing this fic and I absolutely love it!

Victoria

Loved the last two chapters!!!!

i started reading this as soon as you uploaded it!
i love it!
everything about it! i just want more!! the whole thing done
That is all
x

I liked that Draco and Hermione were both jealous. But I'm actually disappointed in Harry. I'm sure he realizes that him and Ginny are totally in different places now in what they want from the relationship. Harry should break up with her because it is more kind to end it than to continue with her oblivious to the fact that they aren't the same people they used to be together. What is he waiting for?

I'm soooo ready for Ginny to get the boot! Lovely reading, thank you!!

Ok Harry, you are just being dense and if you take her back now, you are just a fool. It's time to dump Ginny, same with Hermione and Ron. These two need to realize that love is a two way street and the only times the others concede something or make a sacrifice, is to keep them from being dumped. It's pathetic given Harry and Hermione are supposed to be intelligent >.< lol Great chapter though, I look forward to reading more as always.

Wow..I love the direction this is going. .at first I thought the pace is a little slow but its great as il be able to read more of the story.i check the updates to this story about twice or more in a day..>_<
Amongst all the fan fiction Iv read on this site. .yours is the one that stuck with me..

Draco being jealous was sooo funny to me. His arrogance was wonderful there. 'Pfft, I'm used to just snatching the girl away, it ain't no thang' is what I heard him thinking during that scene when he realizes he's jealous. Cracked me up.
Stupid Ginny. "Oh, I only invited one" Is really her defense?! &%$#@^&*!%
So then there's a drunken scene coming up? I love drunken scenes. They're gonna be drunk right? LOL I'm not being serious.
Your tone is changing slowly in these last two chapters, I can see you are becoming a much better writer as you work through these chapters. Maybe it's the formatting making me think your tone is changing, but regardless, the plot is becoming much richer and your tone is becoming equally richer. The character's motivations are becoming more clear by their actions and brief insights into their thoughts. Yep.
But, I am a bit confused on what you mean by the 'floorboard spell' Could you elaborate on that please? Is it one which makes the floorboards creak?