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*ahem* It seems a little warm in here after that last scene. And I have to wait until THURSDAY?!?! Ugh, what a cruel, cruel woman you are. lol
Aw man, what the hell is Diggory thinking? Eagle stuff... I guess haahahaha! I figured out the puzzle, but I'm not gonna post it here! Man, it feels good to be smart right now.
Poor Harry! He can't even look at a red-head? Lingering effects of the potion(poison) she used on him or heartache? I'm sure you said it, I just finished reading and got super distracted 'cause of that sexy cliffhanger. Dangit..........
Anyway, I'm so eagerly awaiting the next installment of this story!

Bahh !! What a way to end the chapter!! I love the story thus far, I can't wait to continue reading!!

those two are soooo cute together.

First, thank you for the second update!! That was a lovely surprise. :-) I must get to bed, so this will unfortunately have to be short, but the way you connect your dots is awesome. I didn't even think of Draco suffering with Harry! And, I knew when you mentioned the thunderstorms that they were going to somehow come into play, but that was brilliant, my dear! Now, what will poor Draco do? lol I feel badly for whatever Amos got himself caught up in, but I fear for what it will mean. Dun da duuunnnnn Bring on Thursday!!!! HG4eva

Interesting chapter, though I think it would have been easier to admit WHY she was afraid then to try and hide it. After all, she has a very good reason to be afraid and thus it wouldn't seem like a silly fear at all. Also, I noticed the change in spelling in "nott/not" a teaser perhaps?

I love this fic and I cannot believe that Ginny was such a dumb cunt. And to think her apology seemed so sincere. I have noticed that the fic has gradually slowed? Can we please get just a little bit of Dramione action next chapter? Not much to say other than I really miss feeling the Dramione love.

Keep up the good work. At the beginning of one of your chapters you typed the word 'one' when I'm pretty sure you meant 'once'. Also a sentence I have issue with, 'She was amazing in bed, the best and he had ever had.' I don't think you meant to put 'and' in there. I'm sure 'and' is just one of your default words. When I type there are certain words I default type or I want to capitalize everything. Common mistake just figured you might appreciate someone pointing it out.

Speedy update plz?

Victoria

Giny, Ginny, Ginny... Sigh... Yes, I face palmed. Good gracious! What the hell was she NOT thinking?! I can't believe her desperation was that bad. WOW! But, if she wanted drama in their relationship, she's going to get it. For your part though, that was positively BRILLIANT! Draco wanting to comfort Hermione was subtle, but so sweet. And, "...she couldn

Poor Harry!! That stupid bint almost killed him! *&$#&^%* So much cursing should happen! If I were Hermione I would turn Ginny into the Aurors myself! And BTW, right on, Harry! "Never want to see her again" Yeah! don't even give the bitch the satisfaction of your rejection!
And wait. Did Ron really just break up with Hermione? Seriously? What a jerk! Such a hot-head. This is what makes me hate Ron so much. Ron is a terrible character though, and your portrayal of him is even worse. I mean that he causes so much trouble, not that your portrayal is wrong or off, if anything you just made it into a more potant mixture of what makes up the Weasleys.Bah, I'm goin off on a rant, never mind.
The Wizard's Oath bit kinda threw me through a loop. Is the healer bound by something to keep him from spilling the beans on that? Like the HIPA (or HIPPA) laws? Ohhhh, I hope that doesn't come out and start a media shitstorm. It probably will though.... "Revenge of the Ginerva"? Blackmail the Healer and reveal Harry's darkest secrets? What a great title for a chapter that would be!
Also, I like that Draco's Dark Mark reacts to the Dark Magic signature. He reacted so strongly to it filling back in while he was alone, though. Is it shame? But he showed it to Hermione without hesitation. Hmmm... so telling of his feelings, I think. It's the little things that make me want to swoon over that beautiful man LMAO!!!

I read chapters 13 and 14, and I must say I really enjoy the chapters that are full of characters' interactions and action. The chapters where characters discuss magical theory and history are a bit dry. I am really enjoying this story!

Wow, that was an easy out for Hermione o.o Though I doubt it will really be THAT easy. Ron is a lot like Ginny and may try and pull something. I love the thought Hermione had about how she can't really be that lucky. But I hope she remembers that she is happy she is "free" now. Can't wait to read more, interesting idea with Harry btw. Slave spell and botched love potion, creative.