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for A Match Made In Convenience

by ErisNight

person livilletoe
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story can't wait for more!
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! sexy bits!

Poor Draco, having to wake up in that bed all alone. And he wanted to make her breakfast like the sweetheart he is! Aww, what a cute little addition that was. Made me all warm and fuzzy on the inside...

And then there's sweet little insecure Hermione. Beating herself up over acting like a hussy- she totally didn't but her innocence is making her think that way, i understand. Poor girl...

How are they gonna come to an understanding about what happened??????? I sense some angsty chapters looming on the horizon... :(

Seriously tho, I love angst parts of the story, it makes the reconciliation ever so much sweeter. And oh what a reconciliation it would be.... *Daydreams*
person Draconis
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
poor Draco! very well written though. I'm enjoying this story do much. lots of fun to watch the events unfold.
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, wonder how they will work past this?
person DragonsLore86
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am totally in love with your writing style. You are amazing. I am desperate for another chapter already. This has got to be one of the BEST stories that I have EVER read. Thank you.
person Heather
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Sexy Draco with a bit of angst--yeah!
person Victoria
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me sad. I very much feel cheated by the fact that we never got any of the in between chapters. Those moment Draco and Hermione had around the house in the week following her break up with Ron. I really wish we could see some of those. Maybe some flashbacks in later chapters of Hermione or Draco rehashing them tip-toeing around the moments they began to fall in love with one another?

I have panic disorder and I have phobias. Kudos on an accurate description!

Victoria
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! But please don't let either of them suffer in ignorance or silence.

Please give them at least a glimmer of hope as soon as they see each other again.

I'm not saying that everything should just fall into place without a hitch, but honestly, my heart was breaking for both of them, at the end of Chp 16...especially for Draco.

Draco needs needs to "man up" so to speak and lay it out on the table. He's basically "claimed her" as his already and I can't see him letting her go now.

Hermione just needs to "Gryffon up" and not run and hide...she's never taken the easy way out of anything, nor has she ever backed down.

However you decide to handle it...I am very much looking forward to their next encounter!

AND SOON!

LOL

--S

person Meagan
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! More please, I am thoroughly addicted! I can't wait for your next chapter, thank you for sharing!!
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW! After that incredibly sensual, tender and loving time together, it almost seems impossible for that many insecurities to creep in so darn quickly! These are two of the most self-abusing people. ARGH!!! Now, I understand that you have a lot more story to tell and them being happy now would ruin it. And, I am sure the marriage law is going to REALLY mess them up somehow. But, I hope they somehow soon find some peace with their night and can remember it with fondness, rather than pain. Boy! That went from fabulous and hopeful to painful and horrific in a hot minute! Good gracious do they need to talk honestly to one another for a change. lol Thank you again. I am SO looking forward to more soon. Thanks, HG4eva