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Hermione has THE worst timing. It's so strange how comfortable she is with her body but not her self worth. She is so logical and illogical. Ugh, such a girl. Draco, you sleeze. Love it.
I almost hate that hermione and Harry can't just take one for the world and be together. It would just be so easy and nice and wonderful.

alright...first off, I've enjoyed most of this story a great deal. You have a delightful voice and technique. The characters are well written and well rounded. I may not be particularly fond of some of their personality traits, but that only stands to reason as they realistic. That said, the whole up/down extreme misunderstandings between Draco and Hermoine are a bit much. After frolicking in her lingerie sans panties in magical rain with him and then all but doing the horizontal poke and retreat she ducks and weaves to avoid him for a week? His solution is to try to whore his way to a mended heart because she's avoiding him and thus must be rejecting his as yet unknown to him love? The addition of an antagonist that starts out as a possible conquest who then becomes a friend furthers the story well. So long as that's all it is and not another disturbing notch in the bedpost. Honestly, the virgin girl saving it up while 'the' guy fucks everything moving even after falling in love is just yucky...It will be interesting to see how you spin this in the next chapter.

This story is entertaining, for the most part, even though there are certain aspects of it that I find very manipulative. I roll my eyes on occasion, but for the most this AMMIC has kept me entertained. However, I was disappointed with chapter fifteen, and not whole chapter mind you; the part that started like a bad porno. Hermione decides to put on chemise and take her underwear off on the night of this scary storm when Harry's not home. So she goes to Draco's room, and of course he's in his underwear. On top of all of that, let's make it rain. This chapter would have been so much better if it hadn't been so contrived. It was just cheap. Lately, the mention of Hermione's lack of dress and Draco's looks have become redundant. I feel as if you're spending more time on that than you are developing a real relationship between the characters. Yes, they've spend some time together, but it's been facile and overshadowed by constantly repeating what the other thought.

You have an idea, but I felt as if you've rushed the past few chapter in order in order to move on with the plot. This is just my opinion. I do like this story. It's been a minute since a Dramione tale has held my interest. I like your characterizations of Draco, Harry. and Luna. (We need MORE Luna.) I'd decided to stop reviewing and just enjoy the story for what it was, but chapter fifteen just...I can't even really express how...ugh, I found Dramione scene in the chapter, and it started so well. l

Let me first say I love your story. However I don't like the turn it has made. The short is just getting to long and complicated.

I love the angst and the deepness of the story!! Oh and love it when u write long! It helps me wait for next chapter hahahaOmg my heart just broke at the end of this chapter...sob I love it. It felt like draco is actually going to forget about his true love...but I trust u wouldn't let that happen. But still at the moment ..the story lives. I really enjoyed when draco got jealous and that feeling of possession. I want to see it happen again..but of course I will still love it without it since I love how this plot is going :) thank you so much! Keep on writing please<3

Love where this story is going!!! Esp how both Malfoy and Granger think are now stuck in misery - cant wait to see how they sort it out!

I love this story! I hope they sort themselves out soon and fess up to each other. There's too much angst for me! ;) Still, this story is truly enjoyable. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Draco lost control, delightful! I think it's funny that hermione passed out afterwards. I just read in another fanfic that she was mad when Ron would pass out after sex and here she is, sleep from Draco magic. Typical girl, thinking far too much into things. Might have been better for her if she just stayed and talked. No one ever stays and talks anymore. I have been thinking about that riddle a lot lately. I hope you go into that soon. More teasing of Draco please, I do love to see him loss control.

arggg!!!! Why can't people just wait and talk to each other!? Making assumptions is the fastest way to misunderstandings. Harry... do something about your roommates!

Ouch. Ass U Me. :wince: Ouch.
I only hope they can clear things up between them relatively soon... at least less anguish-y.

Thanks for writing.