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Really good chapter. The misunderstanding between draco and hermione was well written. Im looking forward to reading more of this . You're doing a great job so keep writing on.
p.s. theres just one thing I cant wrap my head around :the change in ginnys character is too much.i can understand ron changing to be the way he is but ginny was a really good human being and in one of your chapters when ginny sees luna she calls her loony lovegood which seemed uncharacteristic of her as she was the first to befriend luna in hogwarts.

This story is too amazing for words, I pretty much just read all of it without stopping and cannot wait for more please update!!

Oh and I've read the discussion board too, I understand and like what you're doing with this piece! I hope you don't get discouraged because people don't understand. Dont change a thing!

AAAHHHHH! I need more! This is a great story, can't wait for more! Thank you again for sharing!
Meagan

When I finished chapter 17, I was frustrated with Draco, sympathetic towards Hermione (because what girl hasn't had an unreciprocated crush or love?) and then there's the young attraction between Harry and Luna that you KNOW is going to blossom into something completely sweet and innocent. This story is well thought out, imaginative and well written. Through the angst you see the character's strengths and weaknesses (even if I'm not a fan of constant angst). Keep writing! I look forward to the coming chapters!

Arrrrggggggg!! Damn the agnst! Another good chapter that I have enjoyed reading. Thanks for the update.

I'm not talking to you... I'm just NOT talking to you. Draco didn't get a clue when he saw that Hermione looked devastated... and he's going to sleep with someone to prove something to himself. Ok... now I'm going to go back to not talking to you.

Like the angle taken w/ Herm. and Draco's r-ship. I am curious about what will happen next - I'm not fond of the 'infidelity' while he is aware that Herm. is special to him even though he claims she's "broken" his heart. I like the cliff-hanger left and can only hope that you've a TWIST in store for us - secretly the idea of him 'cheating' on his own heart makes me want to rage.

It's quite strong, this bond b/w them - I was wondering whether perhaps this was going to evolve into a fic. concerning the 'veela-bond' that the Malfoy family are renown for having w/ their mates once found.

A little more disinterest from Hermione - perhaps now that she thinks he is still a 'womaniser' despite his charm and good manner - would be greatly appreciated (I am a sucker for angst just not... what Draco appears to be about to do in chapter 18 (I mean, srsly if his feelings were SO STRONG another woman simply wouldn't do! Wouldn't do at all!). Please update when you can! Thank you

Wow, so much going on... Let's start with Harry. His complete infatuation with Luna is absolutely the most touching and sweet thing in the story. I feel like I am in the throws of a crush reading his thoughts and actions with her. I love that she flirts with him, but is so subtle that he can't truly tell. lol Her statement about seeing him all the time and him not noticing her was beautiful!! His thoughts on Hermione and Draco were nice, too. I completely got the "big brother" protecting his family feeling from him, at the same time as he wanted to somehow help them get together. (Well done!) Celeste... a great addition for the moment and I LOVED her take on things, though I wish she knew both sides of the story, so that her future book could be correct. lol But, she is going to get her "payment for services rendered" so I guess she isn't too unhappy about it. ha ha ha Hermione, the poor confused, hurt, so very wrong woman. If only she would stop avoiding him and actually talk, things could have been so different. But, instead she was her normal insecure self and left him open for another woman. Stupid, silly girl! lol I cringe at the thought of them the next morning. Sigh... And Draco... stupid stupid (sad, hurt, confused, in love) man. I did actually wince when he decided to sleep with her anyway. It can't end well and it's only going to hurt them both in the end. I did laugh out loud that he thinks he can actually talk himself out of being in love with Hermione, though. (Draco, hon, things just don't work that way. lol) I wonder also what Blaise will do to help, as he doesn't seem the type of friend to just let things happen. Plus, we've got Ron still to deal with and all the crap he will pile on her. Eek! I know you said it was an angst chapter and you were right, but man alive, did you get everyone into the worse possible place. lol Great storytelling, as usual. I am waiting for the next chapter.... huh! Not posted yet? Fine! I will wait some more. lol Thanks!! HG4eva

Please update when you can; ur updates are super consistent which is great. i hope draco doesnt follow through with this chick - maybe a trick is up ur sleeve with this moment so it can be avoided. pls pls pls dont let him continue to be a manwhore. yay. also hermione as great as i find her in this fic. is a lil too much of a push-over where draco is concerned. want more backbone/more take charge mione. thank you. the writing is great and flows really well.