rate_review Reviews

On with the naughty scenes! It was overly explicit with body parts, but still loved it. More please.

Wow I'm not gonna lie it wasn't the worst things I've ever read. In fact it was pretty hot. I'd say a solid 4. Should be continued...

Wow. Seriously? Not that good??? That was very well done, very tastfully handled. You may have even gotten away with most of it on ff.net. Hm. I haven't read it there, maybe some of it is posted? I do believe I'd give it a five, because I can't see how it could be better. More graphic maybe, lol, but that's not necessarily better. I love how Draco still has that fire about him. The punch was perfect. I love that he's still so...male, and not all girly in his attitude. I hope he stays that way. Too many fanfiction writers think bottom=femmy girly boy.

"He loved Malfoy in long slow strokes that drew out the sensation, that taught them the feel and texture and pleasure of each other. Primitive need made him want to come, but he didn