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for The Conflict of Hermione Granger

by TheLadyRed

schedule July 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I look forward to reading more of your work!

schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, so glad she found her backbone and not live up to what was expected but what she wanted. Nice writing, very well put together and great character development.
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hermoine a lieing cheating slut ron has every right to be mad
schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story and interesting twist at the end.
schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Brava! That was fun, hot, sweet and real in parts. Overall a great ride and I thank you!! HG4eva
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was a mean, short little teaser chapter XD Glad Draco is on her side though.
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, we knew her breaking it off wouldn't be well-received by Ron. That was actually much better than I saw it happening in my head. At least she didn't wait until the wedding day. I hope Ron and everyone else will one day understand and forgive her. Now though, she has some thinking to do and an apology to make. VERY glad I don't have to wait until the next update. :-) Off to read the next one now. YAY! Thanks, HG4eva
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good for Draco for being a good friend. I know it was easier for him, as he wasn't the one left devastated, but it's good she has someone. I look forward to her mother's words of wisdom, since she encouraged her in the first place. lol Thanks! HG4eva
schedule July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! All that misplaced anger and judgment... tsk tsk tsk young lady! He simply spoke the truth and you can't handle it. You made your bed and thoroughly messed it up, so deal with it! I hope when it's time to apologize, you do it right. You are about to ruin several lives and won't see it. Sigh...I don't think you're going through with it, so you're just setting up poor Ron for the utmost in humiliation. Think, Girl! Hear what you mother said, what Lucius said, what your heart is telling you and be brave! ARGH! I am so dissappointed in her delusions. But, as always, your writing is fantastic! Happy 4th to you, as well! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor fools. lol I love that they both just realized there might be more between them then just sex. Great timing. lol But, I believe you can fix it in three chapters. Though, I do feel badly for Ron, who is going to be very surprised, hurt and crushed. Not to mention angry as all hell when he realizes why she can't go through with it. What a mess... But, I love it! Thank you, HG4eva