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Goldhorse even without your muse you write a very riveting story. I can't wait to read more of your work. If this is what you can do without your muse I can only imaging will write when it comes back.

I hate you. lol Even when your muse leaves you hanging you still pull out a win. I wish I could do that! You had me crying!!!! I think I'm going to read this story every time I just need to cry. It's so damn good!!!!!

I liked the way that you dealt with Hermione's grief in this story. I too lost someone close to me and it does feel like you are betraying them the first time that you feel happy without them; even if you knew that you were going to lose them.

I like this story. But then again, I usually like your stories.

Very very good story. 9 out of 10 on my enjoyment scale, 10 out of 10 on my 'correct grammar and spelling' scale.

Damn you woman, you nearly had me in tears so many times over this story XD *sighs* You are just too bloody good. As with all your other writings, I loved it. It was different and a had a very interesting set of dynamics. I look forward to the new chapter in "Fooling Fate" and anything else your creative little mind may come up with.

Thank you for this one-shot. I am an avid fan of your stories and this one is a classic example of why. You manage to draw me in with such vivid characters. They maintain a great deal of canon personality yet you are able to build new and interesting dimensions within your AU world. The consistent symmetry in this tale, where the last thing that hermione remembers is draco's eyes, acts as a landmark during their journey to growth. I know that writer's block stinks, and hope that you are able to break through. I just wanted you to know that I envy your ability to create an entire world that so readily envelops the readers. keep up the great work.

Amazing...that is the only word to describe your story...I was mad at Ron, sad at her predicament, happy Draco was there for her, cried when she moved and comforted when they moved on...great job for no muse and can't wait for the next chapter in Fooling Fate

Beautiful! You brought tears to my eyes. Severus had such a tragic life but was blessed enough to find two extraordinary loves. It is truly disheartening that Ron let his hurt feeling cause such a rif in Hermione's relationships with everyone she cares about. You would think that after the war he would have gotten it that Life is bigger than pride.

Draco's devotion to Hermione...sigh...he has so much love for her. But it must have been difficult to watch her pine away for Severus all the time, understandable but hard all the same. I'm glad he let his actions speak for him. Hermione got to see the measure of the man he is and not just the boy she remembered from the past. Nicely done!