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person littlemouse
schedule May 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to point out Snape's age by some random moments that remind the readers that he is already 40-ish. And this mousy really loves the friendly banter of the two, to the point of obsession with the idea of time-travelling. I really would love to see the two as equal in age. Though I have no qualms with the huge age-difference in terms of these two. Overall, its really cute.
person FasIkbenVanEyck
schedule October 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great as always OneCelestialBeing!!! Write more, please
schedule March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another resounding hit!! This had me giggling out loud and grinning madly! Fabulous indeed... What I wouldn't give for a Monday like this!! ;)
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awesome! thanks for sharing such a funny and sweet (in a deranged kind of way) story
schedule June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE TELL ME THAT ISNT THE END TO THIS SEXY BRILLIANT STORY???
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh most impressive indeed. Your descriptions are beyond aesthetically pleasing and the whole event from the build of their friendship to their conquest is pleasing. Well done!
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was deliciously fun! Thank you. I love the fact that you left him rather crude, but still made him loving. Wonderful! Thank you, HG4eva
person Missycam
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love every minute of this fab story!
Thank you!
person Trelweny
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ooo... I'm jealous! :laughs: What a cute notion!

My dollhouse furniture was better made than most of my real furniture too. I kept them, most of them being made of some sturdy metal. Unlike the house itself which being a cheep plastic affair only had the uniqueness of its shape going for it.

Very fun story. A delightful read. Thanks for keeping Severus snarky.

Thanks for writing.
person Mrs_HH
schedule June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I got a twitching finger (wink!)

Loved it my lovely xx