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for Reflections of Desire

by tbird1965

person Missycam
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOL I want to see that someday ^^
Thanks!
person Trelweny
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
O_O I can't believe he let her DO that. O_O

Thanks for writing.
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was adorably sweet and terribly funny! Thank you. :-) I loved the growing trust and the feeling of family they're starting to get. But, Molly needs to stop trying to make things so difficult! Sheesh!!! Like the rest of the world isn't going to be hard enough on them?! Thank you, HG4eva
person nari-chan
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
aww that was sweet. i read 14 and 15 and loved them. i am happy that they are getting along and things are going smoothly between them. i absolutely adore the scenes between snape and his daughter. he is awkward still with her and is comical to read how he reacts to the smallest sighs of love and affection the girl gives him. please update again soon i cant wait for the lunch date and the trip to diagon ally for the school supplies.
person Missycam
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Too bad for the lunch....
Thanks!
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
As much as I enjoyed his time with his daughter, I couldn't help but smile at Hermione and Severus' growing ease with one another. :-) I would love to know what cow wrote the article... jerk! He asked her to lunch... hmmm Yay! A true friendship between them would be wonderful, but I do have high hopes for more soon. This is fan fiction, after all. lol I look forward to their, what I foresee as probable, awkward courtship. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I truly enjoy these little snippets of them all growing together. I hope you have a way for Hermione and Severus to parent "together" when he and their daughter are off at school. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
person Missycam
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really love this chapter!
Thank you
person lemonade
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes 'missing child' stories make me cringe, but not this one! I like what you are doing with them, Hermione's insecurities, that you have Snape still being fierce and intimidating but loving to his child.
person EvaBrick
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gah! You can't just leave it there! What's in that envelope?!