rate_review Reviews

why the hell do you have to make ron the jerk in these type of stories.

omg what i come across when i am bored! lol This is a fantastic story and i cant wait to read more! pray tell is this one of those ron bashing stories? just by ron being a jerk and a prude it sounds like this will be a bashing. I do hope Harry and Hermione will be together! i cant wait for the next chapter and needed this kind of story to help distract me from Spanish lol

now personally i would like to see harry/collin/dennis which would cover several listings incest, 3plus, m/m, anal, oral, voy. also it is a hardly ever used pairing even thou it is a logical pairing do to it gives harry the chance to figure out what he does and does not like about sex such as does he like being on top or bottom as well as what kinds of kindy things he may like an of course the creevey brothers would do ANYTHING for the great harry potter.

sounds like in chapter 2 ron is showing off his pureblood bigot side an we know that will not end well. now i think after the first week or two nobody will think twice about the fact there are naked students at school so it is just a matter of getting past that time. now how come no one ever killed dumbledore? how hard would it be for bed guys to use mind control curses on 15 or 20 people so that they try to kill him all at the same time as he comes out of a meeting at the ministry and if they fail they kill themselves? how about polyjuice yourself as the trolly lady on the hogwarts exspress an curse all the 5th years and up to kill dumbledore at the opening feast that would be 10 students per house per year foe 120 students all attacking him at once there is no way no and the teachers could stand up to that fire power. these are the bad guys it is the kind of thing bad guys do.

Good job - this plotline is the first genuinely original idea I've seen around here in probably three or four years.

omg lol I can't wait to see what you have them do next though I feel bad for pansy her father should have his manhood removed permanently np magic to help that bastard no.

If i was them, I would have announced that they did not volunteer but was forced to perticapate or not graduate.

I am interested to read more. ^_^

Please make Harry more endowed then everyone

Yes! I loved the Naked in School series, they were usually extremely erotic and well written. This has the makings of a great story, good luck!