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Really good, need more :)

This story is a house. I absolutely love all the tension, drama, humor, and sexual shenanigans. It's also fairly in-character which just adds to the enjoyment.

Most Excellent.

Hahahahahaha! :D

I love this fic! It's hilarious and bonerific fun at the same time. Nice balance of smutty humour and near-canon characterisations. Just how I like it!

Sorry to hear about your med-resistant depression. Hope you feel better! :)

So far, I've read the first two chapters; I know it's 'fantasy', but we all do wonder, at times, what some people we see in our daily life look like nude. I know I do! I recall the first time I went to a nude beach - I was also nude, and gradually got used to being nude around total strangers. After a while, I found that while being nude with them, I was 'just like them'. No one noticed me being any different than anyone else. So, I was comfortable. Now, being a guy, I was at first afraid that I'd get an erection, and that everyone would see 'it'! Which, by the way, I didn't get an erection. Anyway, I grew to be comfortable each time I went and looked forward to it. So far, I like your story, I just hope they all develop restraints. Use your imagination,I like it and your writings. I'm a guy with an imagination that IF I could be any character in the potter stories, i'd want to be Hermione. She's sexy and for me, I'd love to be her! hence, My use of her name as my 'handle'. Hermione

I swear this is just one of the funniest stories I have ever read! I really hope you continue to write this fic. I'm not surprised Ron was being an ass, he tends to be one in the books as well. I loved the Luna/Hermione scene and from the last chapter it's clear Hermione could teach a few people how to satisfy a girl. I really feel for Pansy, her father is a complete asshole. I'm really hoping for a little Draco-Hermione action in there as well, I'm a huge dramione shipper :P Can't wait to read more!

Very good! I wanna read more! Just a bit of advice: work on your spelling, grammar, and space your paragraphs. I hope you update this soon!

why does this seem like one more story where ron is going to be left out of there freindship.

the great thing about luna is she can get away with that sort of thing and no one think anything about it. all anyone will think is that is just luna being luna.


the females i would like to see harry would be luna, susan, hanna, fliure and gabby. how you work fliure and gabby in is simple christmas holiday or make fliure an assistant teacher and gabby a new student who had to leave her old school do to attacks by other females because she is part veela. an of course fliure takes a job as an assistant teacher to help keep an eye on gabby at her new school. which of course gabby loves and hates at the same time, she loves the fact her big sister wants to help protect her but hates the fact every time she turns around her sister is there. so gabby decides to rebel and hooks up with harry and fliure catches them but is to shocked to either step in or leave and that night she has very wet dreams about herself being in gabbies place an having every one of her holes claimed over and over again by harry.

glad Ron apologized and was totally surprised that Luna licked and made Hermione orgasm! I had to read it twice before the shock wore off! lol This is one of my favorites now and i cant wait for the next chapter! :D

poor pansy I love draco for defending her its good that nott was actually forced to follow the edict.