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December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You should probably have made a point to say that this character is actually an OC, as it is nothing at all like Hermione. It was a good idea, but I couldn't quite get into it.
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November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is wonderful please update or whatnot people do on this site Lol I'm new here so Idk how it works :)
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July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You tried to write yourself into this, which really killed the story for me. Sorry.
Also, your grammar was a little lacking, as well as incomplete words.
Try writing a story using ONLY the characters, instead of replacing one in question with yourself.
Also, your grammar was a little lacking, as well as incomplete words.
Try writing a story using ONLY the characters, instead of replacing one in question with yourself.
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June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please update soon im ding to find out how the compition for her hand goes and how the hell this man knows who she really is?
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June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a fun start! I hope you haven't abandoned this story. It's got so much wonderful potential! Please finish it. :)
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June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far!!