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for "To Change Your Life"

by AnasumiHideki

person ChaosLady
schedule June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is great!
schedule June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really glad they were able to get out of their own way enough to listen to her and happy that Severus' torment by them is ended. But, now I wonder what all these changes will bring, as Voldy is still coming at them... Thank you and I hope you update again really soon! HG4eva
person cherripepsiisgod
schedule June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been wracking my braing about the whole time vortex blablabla. Ive only come up with one possible way it can happen, she would continue to grow and use the name gaines, and watch helself from the sidelines grow. upon her 17th birthday she can come out of the woodwork as an adult, and let her story be known.
schedule June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Hermione is really working hard to make a difference for everyone. The thought of what all of them could do together is scary really. Great chapter. I wonder if they would be able to teach, Lily, Sev and Hermione how to find their animagus forms as well. That would probably be useful for each of them.
person Trelweny
schedule June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hm... I'm not really sure that's the best way to deal with Pettigrew. Not telling him of this meeting and what it entails certainly is a good idea but I worry that they will now ostracize him now, pushing him closer to following Voldemort. But maybe they can not trust him with important things while still remaining friends with him somewhat or increasing their friendship with Peter in a way that he feels more involved and less like a follower? Maybe... but probably not. That's pretty difficult, especially for teens. It will be hard enough for the three Marauders to be half-decent to civil to even Friendly with Severus.

Thanks for writing.
schedule June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me I have not been forgetting to review. For some reason I feel like I have. Anyways, great chapter! I love how Hermione put James in his places without even hurting him. Never mess with one Hermione Jean Granger. You will suffer XD Can't wait to read more and see what the headmaster says...honestly, if I ever found that room I would have loads of fun trying to explore and clean it...
schedule June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HA! Lily Evans...when I read about her and Snapes relationship in the book my first thought was that she was most-likely a selfish and greedy girl. So to see that all of a sudden when Snape has someone else she comes sniffing around again just lets me know that others felt the way I did. YAYA! Great chapter and I can't wait for Sirius and Remus to come lurking out of the shadows...but please don't make Remus a prick, Sirius...well I'm sure that he will be in fact I'll find it highly amusing if he is but I can't see Lupin like that at all it would break my heart. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
person Christpoher
schedule June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Severus didn't even consider that Lily wanted to be his friend? And that the whole 'argument' was his fault in the first place? Seems like both he and Hermione need a reality check.
schedule June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
if harry in the books killed the snake in 2nd year then how can the snake have been alive in book 4 in 4t year and killed that old man???
schedule June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
does this severus know that lily and James die for their son when Harry is 1 years old??