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I forgot to review last chapter please excuse my unintended mistake. I was so happy that you did not make Molly an overbearing harpy when it can to her conversation with Hermione. Although Molly loves her children and treats both Harry and Hermione as hers canon Molly was always quick to judge Hermione as the evil temptress when it came to the boys (Harry and Ron). Your portrayal was refreshing. Molly knows her children's good points and their flaws. She just want them happy.

Now this chapter (ch.9) wow. Harry is so perceptive when it comes to Hermione. He is a wonderful 'big brother' and protector. It just makes me wonder what is up with the whole not speaking to Ron thing?

Hermione's gift to Draco was perfect. I'm very curious about the Dragon being warm to the touch. It if belonged to Dumbledore than it is definately more than just a plain statue. Keep up the great work.

Snape's dialog was great. And the Auror timing was spot on, I thought it was hilarious that Draco pretended to being trying to hold in the truth. Hopefully this time Lucious will serve the full term he is sentenced too.

Hermione and Draco's breakfast conversation was delight full. Coffee better than Veritasium (laughing) too right. I glad Hermoine recognizes that Lupin and Harry are treating Draco different. And it seems as though Molly is on that path too. Good chapter!

Yeah...that was a great chapter. I personally don't know what you didn't like about the conversation between Draco and Lupin but thought it was terrific. Lupin got some very juicy details from Draco about his feelings and observations. Draco didn't take note of it yet but Lupin seems to have given Draco his approval to express his interest in Hermione. Hermione's dream at the beginning really thru me off at first. Who would have thought Hermione had so much unconscious passion. I can wait for the next chapter. I really hope Draco can avoid a major run in with his father until his birthday. Thank you for the update.

The first chapter was well written and interesting. You're prose are fluid, and each character's voice is distinctive.

You may want to post your fics on more than one site. I've noticed that some people who do so, so on here do better on other sites.

Still very intriguing story. I'm hooked now, I want to find out what happens with Draco.

I'm so excited to see where this goes! however it's really rather odd to not have Draco snarking off to Hermione.

Great chapter. I loved the fact that both Snape and Lupin have decided to take care of Draco and get him thru the coming struggle. I'm so surprised that Hermione is so authoritative the chapter (Girl Power....smiling). I'm looking forward to the coming interview.

I'm impressed with this story. I hope you continue. I love your style of writing.

Wonderful chapter. Harry's passionate defenseman of Draco' s character was amazing. It makes me wonder just how much Draco has gone through with the Order to garner that type of reaction. Hermione stated in her testimony that they had two years of war torn bliss with each other. That must have been two very explosive years. Both Draco and Hermione personalities are extremely stubborn but very vulnerable. Draco's weak spots seemed to be his family and his lack of a say in his own life. Hermione's weak spots spots are her insecurities and her family (both blood and adopted). Those two appear to not only have changed each other but those close too them as well. I hope you decide to continue with this story, I would love to read more about what is ahead for Draco and Hermione but also their friendship with Harry and what happened in the past to get them too this point.

oh please continue this...