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Well, it's good to know that the formal style of speaking is only for meetings.

Sorry to hear you've had a shit week. But I love your story!!! It's currently ten to six in the morning, I've stayed up all night reading this, that's when you know it's so amazing you can't put it down :)
Can't wait for more :)
- G

Thank you, thank you for such a wonderfully sexy chapter:<}. You made my day. I even learned a new term. I had to google sub-drop and found a whole bunch of titillating terms.

Hermione seems to be adjusting well to the new relationship and I'm impressed she is so secure in the 'lifestyle' change. She must have done her research because I was expecting her to freak out about being turned on by some of the kinky things Draco does to her. Draco's little show of jealous was terrific. He knows in his heart that Harry is a brother to Hermione but they are so close it would,it be hard to imagine them crossing the line.

I felt so bad that little Pivione died. With the sweet little elf gone who can gain access to Malfoy Manor without Draco's permission? Are there our Malfoy relations or does anyone with Black family blood have access? Do those family marriage contract Hermione read shed any light on the possibilities? I'm not sure why others do review on this site but I have seen other arthurs get better responses from other sites. One in particular allows private messages, *fan fiction dot net* (I wish this one did because I have some many other questions). Just an idea.

Thank you, thank you for such wonnderfully sexy chapter. You made my day. I even learned a new term. I had to google sub-drop and found a whole bunch of titillating terms.

Hermione seems to be adjusting well to the new relationship and I'm impressed she is so secure in the 'lifestyle' change. She must have done her research because I was expecting her to freak out about being turned on by some of the kinky things Draco does to her. Draco's little show of jealous was terrific. He knows in his heart that Harry is a brother to Hermione but they are so close it would,it be hard to imagine them crossing the line.

I felt so bad that little Pivione died. With the sweet little elf gone who can gain access to Malfoy Manor without Draco's permission? Are there our Malfoy relations or does anyone with Black family blood have access? Do those family marriage contract Hermione read shed any light on the possibilities? I'm not sure why others do review on this site but I have seen other arthurs get better responses from other sites. One in particular allows private messages, *fan fiction dot net* (I wish this one did because I have some many other questions). Just an idea.

I am sorry for not reviewing sooner. I just found this story today and read it through from the beginning to this chapter. I was so engrossed in it that I didn't want to take time to stop. Fascinating in every way and very hot. I don't think Dom/sub stuff is for me, but reading about it does make me wonder because it's so arousing. I suppose finding a Dominant partner is important. ...Ron, even canon Ron, has always been prone to disloyalty and I am enjoying how you took this trait of his to the next level in your story. I am impressed by the communicative/prophetic power of the Dragon statue and the impressive magic you invented for Hermione to use on the wolves. Looking forward to more.

The Red Wolf certainly surprised the heck out of me. Now I'm wondering who in the world is his 'new father' and the lady who let him out of his cage? You have just amped up the story several notches with this new tidbit.

Thanks for explaining parts of Ron's reasoning for selling out everyone to Voldemort. He really has a serious inferiority complex with the world at large. How flawed is his mind set that he believe that Voldemort would be the means of making himself important? Makes me wonder if he wasn't caught who would be alive to think that Ron Weasley was an important man? Death Eaters would see him and coward and turncoat. His own family would most likely be killed. Even Greyback said he didn't want him. Draco had it right, a cursed life would be the only life for him.

Poor Harry. How much harder will this be for him? Who will he be able to completely trust now? His best friend and almost brother was willing to turn him over to Voldemort for nothing more than his own glory and the death of a school yard rival!

I can't wait to see what happens when the transformation is over. That little wolfie has a lot of explaining to do....hehe. I'm loving this.

Nooooo......you can't leave us just as Draco and Hermione get to have some sexy time again. Cliffhangers are so cruel. More strange wolves and quite a few of them were she-wolves? I hope these new players are messing up Voldermort's plans as much as they are throwing off Harry's and the gangs. Lupin was being very argumentative with Draco when he made it inside of the cottage. I wonder just how much of that was sleep deprivation and how much of it was him being distrustful of Draco's intention toward Hermione? I think Lupin see Hermione almost a daughter to him and no matter how much he knows Draco really cares for her he just can't let them get down like that. Most of the wizarding world seems to be like the Victorian Era for muggles. So sexy time might be difficult with old fashion, super hearing, pseudo-parental figures hanging around. Oh Grandma what big ears you have (laughing like a loon).

HOT, Hot, Hot! This was a perfect introduction for Hermione into the BDSM lifestyle Draco prefers. In no way was it too graphic. One of my pet peeve is when writers make the first intimate encounter between Draco and Hermione overly sensational. These two are just beginning to find out how each other works and this chapter captured this beautifully.

I don't know if a whole chapter should be about Ron's interview. It is really about where you want the story to focus. But you can always add snippets into any of the other people who were in attendance POV. I think it is entirely plausible that Draco and Harry would talk candidly about it while out on their Horcrux hunts. And Lupin could speak of Ron's treachery to Hermione to help her come to grip with it. Even Arthur could speak to his family members about it. Ron's defection would have a multifaceted reaction to every member of the Order but none as much Harry and Hermione. I'm dying to find out why Ron sold Harry out. Wanting Hermione is one thing but is Ron really that obsessed with her that he doesn't see anything else?

The Dragon is too cool. I had feeling it was more than just a statue. I can't wait to find out what the newest dream is about. Also, what happened to Lucius? Was he sent back to Azkaban? Was he given the Kiss? Does this make Draco the permeate Head of the Malfoy House?

Whoa! There was a little bit of everything but the kitchen sink in this chapter. Ron, the rat-fink is unbelievable. He ultimately sold-out his entire family, the Order, Harry, and the English Wizarding World all for what, a woman who doesn't want him and would hate him if she found out! I can't believe he is that incredibly stupid. And that lame excuse for being gone 2 weeks, I know Ron is supposed to be this great strategist but that excuse is wild. Ron's own self inflated worth knows no bound. Voldermort should have given him a plan or something because Ron obviously thinks entirely to much of himself.

Now Draco's explanation to Hermione about his taste in pleasure was perfect. I don't know if it was intentional but it seems as soon as he crosses over the threshold of a bedroom he changes. Case in point the following morning when he woke Hermione up. He call her to task for not thanking him for the compliment. When talking to Hermione initially, he constantly touched her to reassure her. Hermione seem to unconsciously picked up on his dominance because she asked to be able to get dressed and did not tell Draco to leave so that she could get dressed.

I how the interview with Ron brings out the truth if not totally then enough for everyone to doubt his trustworthiness in the future so that no lives are inadvertently jeopardized.

it's rather amazing. I love it. can't wait to see where it goes! I would like to see the interview of Ronald. what a jerk lol. more lemons ate always good and there's no such thing as too graphic. keep it coming!