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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You did very well writing in English! I'm glad Harry decided to just pierce his ears and nothing else. Hate to see him go over board into Goth or anything else before he looks around and tries things out. He has so much on his plate now that he needs to slow down, think things through, be sure before he decides things or commits himself. He has the most important stuff handled or under way. The Dursleys are probably going to tip Dumbledore off that Harrys some things.
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hey
I love the story so far please keep updating
cullengal101
I love the story so far please keep updating
cullengal101
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Keep it going.
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June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was a busy chapter setting up a lot of background for Remus & Draco now I'm really anxious to read the next chapter set Gringotts. I love that some of these people that I've always felt were not the innocent little two shoes or honorable "you can count on me" types will be exposed for what they are.
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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this will be a good meeting :) i hope the headmaster and the weasel bi**h get what they deserve. along with all the others who wronged him. are Bill, Fred and George good? what of Hermione and Arthur are they good? i want them to be good. all the others can go to hell in the weasel family.
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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far. I enjoy a good Dumbledore bashing as much as the next person. I'm curious to read about goblin trials and justice for those who wronged Harry. My only nitpick has to do with Harry's eyesight. In chapter 2 it was fixed during the goblin healing,then in chapter 7 he got contacts? Can't wait for more chapters. Can I please have some Dray,asap.
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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The begining of the revenge! So nice to read of Severus & Harry getting along so well right away. Goth though...eyeliner, hair color, wants piercings & tatoo? Seems like such a big change without giving himself time to think just react. But maybe this is something he's always wanted. Wait till Dumbledore, Hermione, Ron Molly and Ginny get a load of him!!
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June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love this story
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June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
But what about Hedwig?