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that was so sudden and so damn good. as cheesy as its sounds i could feeel the love. like it was tangible. and it was intense. and it was good. i could relate seeing as how i had someone in my family whom i was very close to having died recently and you captured the essence of how i felt in those last moments. its a very tragic story but all the great stories are. fantastic writing. please dont EVER stop.
alex.

Wow...that was almost painful to read; definitely brought on the tears. Great job! :D

Oh wow that was a beautiful story and it made me weepy too. Apparently today is the day for sad stories. The story was beautifully written and bittersweet. I really really loved it.

wow, that was beautiful. this was truly bitter sweet laced with sadness. the tricky thing about love is that it answer's to no one, and comes around when its least expected. but when love comes nothing else matters but who you treasure the most in your life. you realize you don't want to leave them and just how much thy really mean to you.
beautiful and moving. you capture the emotions like a master and take us on ride that leave us with heart ache and shows us just how unpredictable love is.

very sweet and sad. great story and it was very well written.

Beautifully done!! But sad so very sad...

That was so sad I nearly cried. I'm glad it wasn't longer,I don't think I could've taken it. Still,I don't regret reading it. So poignant.