rate_review Reviews

I just wanted to say I really love this story. It is well written, with rich character development, and absolutely believable when contrasted with the Harry Potter books. I have it bookmarked, and get very excited when a new update is available. I can't wait for the next installment, and I look forward to watching both Harry and Draco grow into this relationship.

Whoo hooo yeah!!! Harry is in for a treat :) Sleeping together with no expectations of sex but with the desire to just be close to someone is intimate all on its own. I really like that :)

about #10..

This was a good chapter, but I noticed something you've done once or twice, even
unseasoned authors have done this. It's when a character gets exasperated and use
the exclamation 'Good God' or 'Oh God'. Now if you think about it, what pureblood
knows about God? Wouldn't the exclamation of 'Oh Merlin' be appropriate?

...and is Harry an unhealthy skinny or just beanpole skinny? If it's unhealthy then
just get some steak, greens & cornbread into him. ;-)

...and it was good to see some of the old Harry back when he flew on the broom, didn't
realize I missed that carefree Harry.

I would like harry to talk to Ginny. Or draco talk to Ginny. That would be interesting.

Damn but I really, really like this Draco! He's like the perfect cowboy...rough and rowdy with a tough exterior, but the heart of a horse whisperer that knows how to calm even the skittish colt!

~~ Meechy

Still reading and enjoying it a lot. Seems they are making some progress. Be fun to see how they work out sleeping together. I was surprised that Harry took taking off his shirt so well. I was hoping to read more of Draco's hands on him & holding him. Ah well smutty me.

Ch. 10

Oh well done, Draco! Harry now trusts you enough to take off his shirt (wonder if he'll tell you what caused each scar) and you could have knocked me over with a feather when he asked to sleep with Draco.

Another great chapter.

does this story ring false for anyone else? nearly every reaction and bit of dialogue seems drenched in melodrama and not in reality... I get that harry is dealing with crippling self image issues, but for him to solve that by sleeping with 100s of people seems inauthentic.

I have loved reading your drarry stories when I get the chance, but lomo, this one is almost tedious. you are such a talented writer I think this particular fic is just not for me and that's disappointing.

Love how your making it so that Draco is breaking Harry's walls one step at a time, and not all at once like some stories I've read. It's never easy to win someone with a broken soul to let down their walls, and learn to trust and love you, after they've been so profoundly hurt.

Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

about #9...

Damn, I think I rooted more for Draco to take Frank down for the
count than Harry. Harry had an opportunity to smash Frank down, with
Draco's help of course, but I feel like he missed it.

Hopefully, this isn't the last of Frank and Harry gets a second chance to
put that mf out of commission!

..and he ruined the damn date too.