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That was a beautiful chapter. Harry is finally getting the courage to talk openly wit some, even if that someone is creepy dispassionate eyes, Millie! However, it was Harry getting the courage to ask Draco to touch him and express what he really wanted that made the chapter. Draco showed Harry that he can simply worship Harry through his touch without Harry worrying about whether he will go to far or if his asking too much. Sometimes a non sexual touch but one done with reverence and comfort can be far more intimate!

Floved this!

~~ Meechy

So glad Harry is finally getting somewhere however slowly and that he seems to realize that Draco is a rock for him.
Draco is like his own personal Knight in not quite Shiney Armor.

Once again, nothing but excellence! I await the next chapter eagerly!

Fantastic! Well paced, developed, and written. Believable and mesmerizing!

I have my coffin of pillows too. it's super toasty.

I think it's more of the Purebloods knowing how Muggles worship an entity they call God, instead
of 'knowing' about God themselves. The way I know that Buddha is associated with India, but I don't
know of Buddhism & its religious teachings. Plus the fact I am sure they are somewhat familiar with the story
they have heard about Jesus thru contact with Muggleborns/Muggles & the association of Christmas over the decades.
Also, I'm sure any holiday regardless of where it comes from that has to do with exchanging of gifts is appealing, no
matter who believes in what....and naturally became adopted into Wizarding Society, which is a common practice with all
walks of life no matter what you believe in.

But, Purebloods actually using the terminology, I think Lucius would frown at that one.
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about #11...

That was an interesting description of Legilimency, a memory that shown like a black diamond. Not too many people
take the time to be descriptive of things that become commonplace.

I liked the playfulness between Harry & Draco, I hope you do more of that in the future.

All in all, they made good progress in this chapter and it was good to see both of them somewhat unguarded with
each other, especially Harry.

Your Draco has so much more depth than the original, mostly because we actually get to see things from his POV than just Harry's all the time. I really feel bad for Harry in that he has tried to get help and like a lot of his life, simply ignored or only looked at for who he stands for not who he is! Draco is slowly breaking through his walls and helping Harry learn that there are people out there that can care about him for just being himself.

~~ Meechy

Draco & Harry made real progress this chapter. That bed sounds sooo good especialy since it's late.

Again such a lovely chapter! My heart was aching for both, Harry and Draco. It's so sweet how their relationship is so slowly developing. It's just lovely! How often do you update this fic? Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

This is going to be an interesting sleepover ^_~ please update chapter 11 soon.