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for The Heirloom

by soldiersgirl0709

person lemonade
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I wonder if his inability to feel love had to do with Roman. Is it a curse? Looking forward to finding out. Also, I'm confused about the Malfoy family... Abraxas was Lucius' father, and Orpheus was Lucius' great grandfather, but Roman would have only been around 93 if he had lived (considering that the ring was 75ish years gone from the Malfoy family estate). Considering wizarding life generally ends at about 150 (per Jo Rowling), would this mean that Roman was a much younger son, the product of a second wife, or was he the son of the unnamed grandfather between Orpheus and Abraxas? If Roman was the brother of Abraxas' father, it might explain why he was expendable. The heir and the spare, so to speak, would make him non-essential if the other brother married 'properly'.

Also, did Julianne kill both herself and her baby, or did she give birth and then kill herself? As a single mother who did everything for her child while sporting a very bruised, broken heart, I have a hard time finding sympathy for Julianne's choices. But if there is a line of Granger/Malfoys out in the wizarding world, I wonder if they will try to find this person/family.
person Emma
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH.MY.GOD - I almost fell over when I saw that new story - I'm so exciting!
I loved all the previous ones and hoped you'd come back eventually!
Glad that you decided to write again and lovely to read (on the blog) that you're so happy!! :)
person Emma
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I obviously ment excited, not exciting! I'm excited!!! :D
person jelly
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read the story yet, but I just wanted to say I'm so excited you're back! I found your stories last year, and I've read through them several times :) I've been reading my way through them again, and just noticed the number of stories had gone up :D :D :D
I'm not usually so fan-girly, I swear! ;) I'm off to read the story :D
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, I'm looking forward to seeing where the story is going!
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It is wonderful to see you back, milady! It has been awhile since you graced us with a new story. I adore your portrayals of the Slytherin men and have your author's page saved to my favorites. Don't get me wrong, I love your Remus stories too, but the Slytherin Sex Gods are a delight. You have captured the basic nature of the characters very well and I hope to see more of this story and others very soon.
person DB1
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@5 yay a juicy new story!!! Update soon!!

DB
person Nightqueen
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Squeal!! Does Happy Dance all over room!! You're Back!!!!! There are no words to convey just how much you have been missed! I love your stories and I love how you write my favorite characters!! This knew one is no exception! I love a good romantic mystery and tying these two people together for a romp through their family past sounds absolutely intriguing!! I just know Lucius is going to find out what it feels like to love so deeply that you can't live with out her!! I hope all has been well with you and I just want to say welcome back!! I'm so excited to read your new story!!!
person angeleye68
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! So happy you are back and with a brand new story. Missed you and your stories so much. As always, this is a great first five chapters. Welcome back dear writer~ Angel
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am sooooo happy to finally see this posted! I'm intrigued by this whole story. Reading about Hermione's Nana made me tear up a little. My Nan is just as important to me. Not-so-patiently-waiting for more! Look forward to seeing it all unfold.

Love
LBE <3